[Esus]

Chapter One

Archibald scuttled quickly along the smooth metallic floor, carrying a flat metal tray covered in an asortment of equipment in his two lower arms, whilst his upper arms flailed around expressing. Archibald was talking to himself again.
"I don't really want to do this!" his voice squealed out, echoing along the wall.
"It's tough now, you stupid boy. You've gotta do it! We have no choice!" came the same voice back.
At the end of the long corridor was a large door, high enough for 4 vykkers on top of each other, and as wide as two vykkers standing abreast.

"Dicky!" screeched Archibald.
"Shaddap!" he replied to himself, "Theres no one here and you know, lets get on."
"smartass" he muttered,
"What was that!" he said in his ever high pitched voice.
Archibald now stood in a large wide round room, the walls were padded and brown with large brown pipes running along them. At various points in the room there were large, clunky computer terminals with large smoking computers behind them.
Archibald scuttled up to one, kicked it with his forward right leg and tapped the screen with his top right hand.
"Nothing, you idiot. Let's get on."
Archibald tapped the screen two more times a bright green light appeared upon it. Once the computer introduction had finished, a wire frame green picture appeared showing an incredibly strange picture.
"Excellent!" cried Archibald. He tapped the screen a couple more time, huffed, then turned to the operating table in the middle of the room.

Quickly brushing off a rat which was nibbling on the first subject, he began to work.
"No, that doesn't go there you idiot,"
"Will you just shup up? Do I look as though I need your advise?"
"Of course you do, now watch, it goes like this!"
Patient number one quietly moaned in it's drugged sleep.
"Eww, you didn't need to do it like that, that's just digusting."
"Wheres Dicky? He needs to clean up this revolting mess, look, it got all over me."
"I know, I know.... DIIIIICKY!!" he screamed.
Minutes later the doors opened again. This time a young intern entered, his lips were messily stitched up and drops of blood kepy dripping from where the blood wouldn't clot in one of the holes.
"Clean up this revolting mess, Dicky."
Dicky said something inaudiable and then began to slowly clean away the blood and flesh that had caused the mess. Once he had done, Archibald moved back to subject one after studying the mian terminal once more.
"I told you it goes like this.... Get outta here, Dicky!"
Dicky left the room.
"OK, ok, you were right, so what? It's still gonna work."
"I know, I know" he replied once more as he rammed the scalpel in the soft elum tissue.
"Subject one is almost ready!" he cried jubilantly.

End of Chapter One

Can I have some feedback on this? I would like to continue with Chapter Two soon, so expect to see it once I know what somebody thinks.