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12-05-2003, 03:10 PM
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Originally posted by Silversnow
Yes, I liked most of the latest two parts. Except the deflecting-bullets-with-a-sword part. It was just too much bad cartoon. Or Neo.
Yeah I didn't like that much, and I don't know why i wrote it but hey, it's not like it effects the story much.

Chris slowly squinted her eyes open, above her a bright light shone into her eyes. She closed them again and shook herself. Her clothes were soaking wet, with her own blood. She tried to think about what happened but her head was a mess. She tried to move her arm, but found it strapped to the slab she was on.

**Meanwhile**

Panther worried. It'd only been a simple kidnap operation, what could go wrong? He was in a hotel room in the centre of town. He was readying himself to find out what was wrong. He was going to meet a contact at the Candle Time Cafe this evening. He wore a tuxedo. In one of the inside pockets he placed a Silenced Beretta. In the other he placed a Combat knife. After his report, he was going to find out what'd happened to Chris.

it was Eight PM he sat down at a table. On the other side a tall Brunette woman with long hair and eyes that shredded men to pieces.

Panther: Just a quick check in. I'm going on a solo op tonight. This cafe.

Elise: Yes, set your old comms up, I'll give you a hand, as you don't work solo much.

Panther: Thanks Elise.. Well I've got to get going, I'll talk to you in a couple of minutes.

The pair get up, they exchange a brief kiss. They both leave the cafe.

Panther walks to the alley where Chris waited the night before. he opens his bag and attaches several clips to his belt. He also attaches three fragmentation grenades. He was having no mess. In on his own, out with Chris, or else he's die trying.
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