thread: The less-incredible journey
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11-22-2003, 03:20 PM
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Native this is great!
this is one of the best ow stories that I have ever read,(you just need to work on your dialog a bit more) other than that it's a good start. please keep writing.) Mists little sister Mipsey)(but written by misty)
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