thread: The less-incredible journey
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11-22-2003, 03:12 PM
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Native this is great!
this is the best oddworld story that I have read in a long time, (you just need to work on your dialogue a bit more). Other than that your story is perfect! just promise me that you will keep righting additions to this story!
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