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08-28-2003, 10:50 AM
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Sitiuation:

When Geeble got to the Raison's cave an errie silence filled the cave. It hunted him as he approached the Raison's cave. Nothing like this has ever been seen on Oddworld before. thought Geeble.

The rats slowly followed him into the cave.

As he was getting closer to the chamber inwhich the Raison resided he notice an aweful smell comeing from it. He had second thoughts about going in but he decided to do it anyway. Geeble slowly got off his scrab as he tied it to a stalagmite. He moved slowly to the chamber as the smell got worse and worse. The chamber was no longer glowing like it used to. It was dark and a rotten smell filled everywhere.

Just then Geeble started to chant to shed some light on the matter. The glow from his chant would light the cave to reviel what happened.

So he did and suddenly an in instant, in a flash he saw what was left of the Raison. A Corpse he saw frightend him in a way he could not comprehend. The Raison was dead as its corpse was decomposeing in the darkness of the cave.

Suddenly Geeble began to panic has he backed away from the the Raison now dead. He could believe this so he suddenly ran out and untied his scrab from the rock and mounted himself.

"Comeon rats lets get out of here there is something bad really about this. Lets get back to the capital!"

So then they left in an instant headed back to the capital but something was lurking in the shadows of the Raison's cave when Geeble was there. Something of peer dark energy. It spewed its way out of the shadows and started to consume what was left of the Raison. It began to stand up as it too left the cave to follow Geeble to the capital. The black creature completely made from peer energy was something not of Oddworld but more of spirt. It was then slowly following Geeble across the wilderness back to the Capital. Will Geeble confront this creature before he makes his way back or will he die?


(Ok Oddguy you have a strange black entity with absolutly no face following you now. Its your time to shine. The creature won't attack you right now but its just cerious in you right now so its following you slowly. Think of it being a sort of Oddworld styal RingRaid following you. Its a fragment of the nothing in the form of a creature. You don't notice anything but you feel a very evil and dark presence in the area. You can eather stay and investigate this presence or you can keep on going back to the capital and come back to the cave later. Its your choice mann.)

You see this is how it works write portions of the story which will then place our characters in situations and then we figure out how to resolve the situation and then exacute it. After that we keep doing the same thing. Now this is what RPG is all about. and we will give the situation. But we are still on the first part of the quest. I would suggest you to get back since you are pretty much by yourself and there is an evil dark presence following you. And since we are at level 1 it will be rather impossable to beat this alone. You can probabaly defeat this with being in a group. Those are the options.

Paramiteabe...

Oh on another note all of you guys can give sitiuations to each other just like what I did to Oddguy. Like I would write a part of the story and then say Grig gives me some sort situation I personally have to deal with or ignor it and then will have envitably face it later. you can do that to other people we are all sort of like mini DMs. Just remember to write Sitiuation like I did before you post one to another person
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