Gomen nasai. I must of missed that bit in the second chapter. Comes from reading more than one fic at once, while chatting....
Mistoffelees: If you keep that up, your head will implode, and I'll laugh.
....Misto, muses only come out when the author is writing a story.
Misto: Well I've been following you around everywhere else, adn I've been here before.
*sigh* I'm going to return to my review now.
Misto: Ok.
I noticed a few spelling/grammer errors in that chapter, do you need a beta-reader? It could help a lot. Most of the time I need someone to do mine, 'cause I wrote them at 1 am or something, and they look really bad.
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