[Leto]

This is my first attempt at writing a story, so could ya give me feedback and suggestions please? Thank you. Also questions.

Chapter One: The average beginning.

The slig awakes, to yet another day of smacking and shooting. “ Hey there #7, how are you this morning?” #7 smacks his computerized cubicle. “I have feelings you know--!” said the computer as #7 slams the door on it. As he walks to the Sloghut, #12 runs up to him, breathing deeply. “ 7, 7!!!” He screams, as #7 replies “WHAT IS IT?!”. #7 comes to a halt as #12 converses. “You’re being replaced, by #9. Dripik thinks your too dated… Sorry,-” But #12’s face is shortly met by the back #7’s gun. “When did this happen?!” “Shortly after you woke,” said #12, slightly agitated. “What, so now I am #8?” “It appears so..” . They both heard little squeaky footsteps. “It’s Dripik!” said #7. “Shut the hell up!”. The two sligs fell silent, and Dripik stopped in front of them. “I’m sure you’ve been informed about, uh… er,” “The thing?” said #12, again being smacked by #7’s gun. “Yes, #7 you are now #8. If you don’t agree with these terms, visit my office. Good-uh- bye! Yeah, that’s it..” As he walks off #7 raises his middle finger and cusses. “Well look on the bright side of things,” said #12, “You can work with me in mine construction-” Seven (aka #7/8) then interrupted. “Work in the mines? With you? Is there a reason why I should be happy because of this? I’ll really miss my friggin’ helicopter.” . As he walks depressed to the mines, he notices a helicopter slig he had never seen before in his life. He had a twinkle in his eye, if you could call it that, as it looked like the sun and he was outside. He seemed to want to get out of there, desperately, and is gone in a matter of seconds. Seven and #12 entered, and to there shocking surprise, everyone was dead.
Stay tuned for the next pitiful excuse for a chapter, next!