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Originally posted by Kesiah
Interesting...
I do like the art. I'm not to good at computer graphic work, because my peice of junk barely passes as a computer, it's so old... So I work better with paper.
The story is nice too. Though, it might be a little easier to the eye with small paragraphs, or maybe gaps when someone speaks. Just a suggestion.
Question: How did the character decide to call himself 'Evit'? If he has no memory, where did the name come from?
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well in the second chapter i beleive, he heard a voice call him evit and in his mind i would put "Evit" in "s because he just heard himself referred to that, as in "this is maybe my name".
and i will posta pic of Evit soon.