Interesting...
I do like the art. I'm not to good at computer graphic work, because my peice of junk barely passes as a computer, it's so old... So I work better with paper.
The story is nice too. Though, it might be a little easier to the eye with small paragraphs, or maybe gaps when someone speaks. Just a suggestion.
Question: How did the character decide to call himself 'Evit'? If he has no memory, where did the name come from?
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If you love something turn it loose. If it doesn't come back, hunt it down and kill it.
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Author of "Quest for the Can Opener" And several other fics. See them at Fanfiction.net!
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