Thank you guys! Mac you're totally right about the eyes. Eyes are very important in drawings. If you screw up on the eyes, the whole picture looks bad. One time I was drawing a portrait of someone, and I accidently shifted the eyes in the wrong place........anyway, the drawing ended up looking like a completely different person. The saying, "the eyes are the window to the soul," makes complete sense. In Steef's case, I did the basic outline of the face and my main detail started on his eyes. Eyes show you what people are feeling, and I tried to capture "the poker face" part of Steef. I'm gald to see somebody notice the little details that makes all the difference!
