Both those reviews I find both largely accurate and complimentary, and, more importantly, extremely well-written. It's quite refreshing to come across properly crafted works of scripture after the friendly casualness of forums, chat rooms and the like. You deserve an applause.
I must be feeling quite literate this evening. In my excitement to test out the typewriter that is at our house temporarily, I wrote a three-paragraph scene around a lake at night, with a shadowy figure ending his life. I hadn't intended for it to take place on Oddworld, but halfway through I imagined it made a nice introduction to a story.
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