Hooray! New pages! Now, to start, I won't do the same old thing as everyone else, you already know you're good at drawing. What I will do, though, is criticize (or however it's spelled.). Don't think I don't like it, I really do.
I like the story so far, but doesn't the Noctero's wings look a bit strange? They would be quite hard to use, if that's what they're there for.
The screenshots on page three was original
What has the slig on page 2 been eating...?
But I can only imagine how many different Oddworld comics will follow this one's footsteps...