it's just a quick summary of the story there's alot more to it i looked at your thread....not bad
.....i like the new creature concept but iv'e been going over story plans so just to make you a slight more impressed ok here's the parts i left out: at kinto mountain abe must face ancient kinto spirits and deadly tests they give to him in order to deface the sacred grounds and the kinto spirits have set loose an ancient monster who only knows how to masacre and kill, with a hundred claws and fangs it is waiting for mudokon meat, abe must outwit the creature in order to find munch's secret pool, abe then must meet up with munch in skillyas chamber, fight skillya, and go to the newsroom and stop newscaster slig from spreading the word to maggie that they've found the secret pool so she dont send her croanies out there......there are multiple endings and extra stuff if you angelic or black quarma