Yes, I suggest you visit my thread "If you could make a fan game, what would it be like?" and see what I have done for my game (which isn't flash or anything, its the real thing, but still usefull). I have posted alot of concept drawings and a story line. Your story isn't bad, but its missing some bits. How did munch get captured? why did the young gabbit hide his eggs in a kinto hill? what does abe have to do to free munch? where does abe have to take the eggs? quite unclear really...
But other than that, not a bad idea...
But this really takes munch out of the picture for gameplay...
Reese
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