Ah, sounds like one of those Lion King type stories. You know what I mean. Heh, sorry if that
sounded like an insult (and it's not an insult or anything), but that's just what I thought since it had that (and I quote from Red Muse) "...warm, fuzzy, pony..." feel to it. But anyway, it's nice. It'll make a nice animation script
... especially if you put some violence/gore into it
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