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03-27-2003, 05:29 PM
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Ok, this might not be that good, but i hope Kes can come and write her bit every so often.

Alf trudged across the desert, wondering what had forced him to agree with this.
"Hey, Alf!" Came a call from behind him.
"What?" Groaned Alf. It was that idiot Mudarcher, Mick.
"Where (cough) are we goin (cough)?"
Alf sighed. ("28," counted Munch) "I've told you guys, 7 times already today, Necrum."
"(Cough) why?"
Alf sighed again ("29") "Because, from there, we can find a bird portal that will take us in to The Necrum Mines, then we'll probably be able to get a hand cart or something to Feeco Depot, and then on to what's left of the Soalstorm Brewery."
Mick coughed. "But how (cough) can you be (cough) sure that there is a (cough cough) way (cough) in?"
("30") "Because Abe told me."
"Wow, Alf! ("31") Do you always talk about Abe's missions? Are you really such good friends?" I don't really need to tell you that this was Ben, do I?
You'd think so wouldn't ya? Then you see that he dumped me with you freaks! Thought Alf. "Pretty much, yeah, now go talk with ya brother!" He said.
Ben drifted back to the end of the lines and got in to a deep question-and-answer conversation with his brother about the evolution paths of moths.
"So, Alf, (cough) where are we going?" Asked the Tommahawker.
Alf almost screamed! "WASN'T ANYBODY LISTENING WHEN I EXPLAINED THE MISSION, EARLIER?!"
"No!" Shouted Munch.
Alf sighed. ("32") "It's gonna be a long trip..."

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