This was a great story Kes. You should give yourself a pat on the back.
Think of it this way guys. Now its time to broaden your horizons and reply to some other fan fictions too.
~Formally Closes~
I feel everyone has said what is needed and remember to keep an eye out whenever I have time to get the ball rolling and get things started with our contests here in FC. I expect you to enter this in Kes. I apologize for the length of time all of you have waited though. I have had lots of work to to in the past few months.
once again, congrats to Kes on a job well done!
-Sincerely, Al the Vykker FC Mod