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Oddworld: Actra’s rebellion
Part 2: Escape.

“Leave him ALONE!”
The Slig turned around, surprised that he’d get any reaction besides more fear and cowardice. His puny eyes narrowed, though you couldn’t see it through his mask. His temperature flared.
“What’d you say, punk?” He said as he advanced upon her slowly.
Actra had felt a new sense of responsibility, and apparently that came with a burning anger, so she decided to use this to her advantage.
“You heard me, Boogerface,” Actra growled; snatching the club from the ignorant, green slug. “Leave him alone, or you’ll be so, sooo sorry.”
The Slig just chuckled, apparently still unaware that he was without his weapon. “Heh, and what are you gonna do, Twinkle toes?” He snorted. “Pinch me to death?”
Actra pulled her arm back. “Don’t blink.”
And with a force that seemed to be guided by the great Shrykull himself, Actra rammed the Slig right out of his mechanical legs. He was sent blindly sprawling back, and was only stopped by a small rail over a huge drop onto a conveyer belt.
Actra snarled. Then she drew her arm down to her own level, and just stared at her two-fingered hand. She realized that she wasn’t just fighting for her people. She was fighting for all creatures that have been plagued by Glukkons. The Glukkons needed to be stopped. They needed to be stopped immediately.
Actra was pretty proud of herself, but in her pride, she forgot one important detail:
The hallway the Slig was rammed back to had an alarm button on the wall. And as luck would have it, the alarm sounded.
And that was it. She was a criminal.
The alarms whirred and lights flashed. Actra could see her own picture appear on a screen with the word WANTED in bold, red letters across the bottom.
She could hear the clatter of reinforcements running down the metallic hallway, a few were making “Gonk” noises produced by their masks.
“FREEZE,” a Slig in bright red detailing hollered. Actra was surrounded. Then a ray of light, faint yet promising, gave her an idea.
Actra spread her wings out and flapped them slowly just parallel to the ground, causing her to take lift. She balanced herself in midair and took off in just a few beats of her wings.
The Sligs, though tenacious in their firing, were terrible shots and missed horribly. Soon, Actra made her way to the ray of light (an air vent) and flew for her life.
She knew exactly who to go to in a time like this.
Abe and Munch.

Want more? Well, Too bad! That's right, you heard me. You guys will have to wait until the comic is finished. This was just chapter one.

I also wanted to know why nobody but Splat or Ghost replies to my posts? Could other people please at least answer? EDIT-I also wanted to thank PARAMITEABE for his reply.