Late post here (of course)
GREAT story!! Poor Aura!
Would L-O-V-E to see her stab that *s.o.b* Yax with a chunk of glass! (But thats me)
Heh heh, you can tell you're writing's good, you got characters your readers love to hate!
I hate cliffhangers, you gotta write more, don't leave us like this!
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