[Splat]

Bos woke up, face down in a shallow pool of water. He jerked up, coughing and spluttering. He tried to remember what had happened, he had seen something in the mist, then... He'd shouted something wierd, what was it? He couldn't remember the words, but it certainly wasn't Oddish (the local Oddworldian language). And then what? He couldn't remember anything after that.
He looked around the room he was in. Stone walls, and shallow puddles around the floor. a small pool in the centre of the room. And a long shaft above his head. The cave was lighted with what looked like daylight, but there was nothing to make it. There was no visible way out of the room.
What had happened? He thought desperately. He'd shouted, then... the ground had given way and he'd fallen down. He must have lost consiousness as he fell. He looked up the shaft again. It lead up in to darkness. He couldn't see light in it. A fleech couldn't withstand a fall that far! (anyone who played around a lot in Abe's exxodus willl know that fleeches can withstand falling extremely far)
He looked down in to the water again. And stared in amazement: His eyes, they weren't red, they were blue...

and ghosts variation is really getting weird. And i would recomend to big bro slig to hurry up and write, were getting way ahead of him. Do a few chapters together.