Ok, Kai, that wasn't funny. Yes, I do understand that sex is a part of love, so you didn't have to make me look like a complete ass hole on my very first thread! I maybe immature, but you didn't have to point that out, either. And, I wasn't the only one to feel unconfortable when reading that line...I believe that 89da11 was not sure either. I did like the poem apart from that, as I stated earlier.
Kai, I also feel that having sexual expression in poems is not a bad thing...unlike what you think I think....Although when I started the thread, I intended it to be of the Shakespear style...
Right, now I ask, can we please forget all this unpleasant buissness about the way in which we write our poems, and simply go back to the topic of the thread 'Romantic Poems'....I appologise for my behavior towards you poem, which was totally unlike me, for I believe that people should have the freedom to write whatever they wish.
Thank you for you time, please continue with the poems, Kai...and everyone else
oddchick