thread: Romantic Poems
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01-31-2003, 10:51 PM
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I'm not going to disect that single line of my poem for you However...I am sorry that you (miss odd) does not understand the fact that "sex" is all a part of love...in the future I will remember to put this above my poems

Warning, this peom contains a singal line of sexual expression, suggested for the mature only!

And that wasn't sarcasm I just can't stand a immature mind saying I should not have included "play toy, play girl" in my poems. Anyway enough of all this. Continue with the poems people.

P.S. I still believe poems that rhyme every line is rather..."childish".
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