I wasn't
criticizing, merely comenting. And Kai, you said that not all poems rhyme, that is true, but, you said it was kidish when they do.....the best poem i have ever read rhymes, it is called the rime of the ancient mariner, and it is NOT 'kidish'. Oh, and Kai....the fact that the poem was 'sexual' was NOT appropriate, especially over the internet, and im sure blue didnt approve of it...ik. Oh yes...and kai, you said you made it up on the spot...i made both my poems up on the spot
. And all that rubbish about hugz and candy....that is not at all what i write, ok? jesus, man...no romance at all....