Critisism, critisism
Number one, not all poems rhyme...reason, it's a bit of a kidish thing, so to speak. Two, so my poem was a little "sexual" but love isn't all about hugs and kisses is it
If you ask me, making that up on the spot, was brilliant. However, some people don't appreciate the feel of certain poems
I will now go about my life making poems that rhyme and talk about hugs and candy...and compare lovers to the sun and the moon
But you haven't seen the last of me
