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Originally posted by Darkest
Yes, I know they were born with psychic powers... but what does it cost? I quote the great writer Orson Scott Card.
"What is the cost of magic? If there is none, then your characters become gods, doing anything as they please. If they are gods, then there is no problem in your story. So there is no story."
- If you use the psychic powers, are you weakened? Do you feel tired? Or does it use spooce?
- You said the towers were made of steel, but in oddworld, it is called Steroon. Where does your race get the metal?
- You can't just have lava because it looks cool, that is wasteful. The Tak'la don't make stuff just because it looks 'cool', they build it for a purpose.
- How are the Platforms held above the ocean? What powers it?
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1. You become weakened, correct, but not physicly, mentaly, thus making you (I'm using this just to be simple) "Stupid".
2.Miners. (*will post sub-species soon*) but Geh'krok mines with slaves, they take anyone they can find and make them a slave, besides themselves.
3.Heat, the Geh'krok feel that they need to have extream heat(part of their religon witch I'm not going to post YET, I haven't figured out all the details on god names, bear with me) to live at comfort, they became a sub-species after being exposed to the Lava.
4. Giant turbines, like the ones on a jet, made so that the weight of the plat form holds it down while still suspending it, some citys use large blimp sturtures. They power it with electricty, wich is gathered from storms, they set up pods that are held with baloons, that gather electricty, everyonce in a while, someone will go out and colect the cells that have filled up inside the pod, then replace them with empty ons, ect ect ect.