Nice
Very good, I wonder if you are expanding on this? Or is this just a short story? Keep it up, I want to know what is going on!
I was however confused, your words and sentences were very clear, but at the end of the story, I kinda seemed dissapointed. What the heck was the powder flame thing? Is it all gonna lead up to him leading a boring existence at military camp? Is it magic? Is it drugs?
What the heck is going on!?!?!.!..?.... Whew... Write more will ya?
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Anytime I see something screech across a room and latch onto someones neck, and the guy screams and tries to get it off, I have to laugh, because what is that thing.
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