Yes, I know they were born with psychic powers... but what does it cost? I quote the great writer Orson Scott Card.
"What is the cost of magic? If there is none, then your characters become gods, doing anything as they please. If they are gods, then there is no problem in your story. So there is no story."
- If you use the psychic powers, are you weakened? Do you feel tired? Or does it use spooce?
- You said the towers were made of steel, but in oddworld, it is called Steroon. Where does your race get the metal?
- You can't just have lava because it looks cool, that is wasteful. The Tak'la don't make stuff just because it looks 'cool', they build it for a purpose.
- How are the Platforms held above the ocean? What powers it?
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