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01-18-2003, 08:43 AM
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Well, they have been living here for a few thoasand years. They inhabited it about 13007BA (before Abe ).
Anyway, youve asked for it, so Ghost, this chapters to you for responding to my PM return. A nice shiny new chapter is awaitin you and to see it, all you have to do is look down!

Chapter 4.
Mica looked around with his eyes. He was still totally paralysed. He was also totally numb all over except for a tingly, itchy pain all over his body. His sight and hearing where fuzzy and his head felt light. He wasn’t sure if this was from being held upside down for so long or from the pain of being held up from a broken arm for so long.
He looked up at the building the vykkers had stopped by. The one who had spoken to him had explained a lot to him. They where scientists. The sort of mad scientists you read about in stories like Francelinstirein, Mica had thought when he heard about the sorts of experiments they did. The trap he’d fallen in to was for any creature that happened to be walking past, especially escaped interns, the only other creature on Vykos.
They had walked for maybe half an hour until they stopped in front of a massive building decorated in strange patterns.
“welcome to the court of President Micadil!” The vykker announced proudly.

Mean while, miles away, yet at the same time, very close, a strange creature watched the events. It would be impossible to describe it because it seemed to be made up of every creature on Oddworld. Not just the ones on Isla Karna (the island which contains Mudos and alone has the same land-mass of Earth) but all of them, all of 1276 similar sized islands! Its shape seemed to be constantly changing shape to fit in all the parts but it was always the same shape. It appeared to be a different combination of creatures, depending on what angle you looked at it from!
It was obviously troubled. He had been assigned guardian of Isla Karna by Odd, his almighty self but he was worried. The boundary lines had been crossed and, though only by one tiny slig, it had information that could destroy Oddworld’s whole natural balance.
A second of the creatures entered and looked him. “where is he now Makajia?” (this is the closest me could possibly get to his real name. The real thing would be unpronounceable to any lower creature and would literally drive you nuts as you tried to pronounce it. It would become an addiction that you wouldn’t be able to escape!)
Makajia jumped. “Oh, sorry. He’s at the palace of Micadil.”
But that could mean…”
“Yes Sajilia, it could. I tried what I could but Mica is too strong. Any normal creature would be dead or nuts. I even uttered my name to him several times but he blocked it out. We will have to take him to Odd almighty.”
“I’ll come with you then.” Sajilia replied. Her proper name would have the same affect as his. ”I am yet to see Odd and last time you said he said he would like to see me.” She paused “unless he’s changed his mind.” She sounded sad but Makajia laughed.
“Odd almighty never changes his mind. Our son can watch Vykos and Sligos while we are gone.”

Meanwhile Mica was carried in to the building. The walls where decorated in bright colours that made him feel queasy! He was eventually carried in to a gigantic hall. From the front of the room he heard a voice that bristled with authority:
“Akko, head scientist of the Scikelian plain, city status, 1st class researcher, rank, 5 and discoverer of the intern gallbladder, you have sent a message reporting of a new species you have discovered. Please report of where it was found.”
“At the edge of the Scikelian forest.”
“And please produce a living specimen of this species.”
Mica was thrown to the floor and he slid through several rows of feet. He looked up to where he could just make out the hazy outline of a large crome throne, on which sat another vykker. “That.” He heard Akko say!

What’ll happen to Mica? What’ll happen to Raffe? What’ll happen to Makajia and Sajilia? What’ll happen to Akko? Where is an interns gallbladder? Find out the answers to some of these questions in our next exiting instalment, CHAPTER 5! (Ooooh! Chapter fiiiiivvvee!)
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Oddworld novel: The Despicable. Original fiction: Small Worlds.


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