I think im meant to be writing my own version of chapter 1 so i'll do that.
Bos walked towards the mist. Suddenly, behind him he thought he heard a noise. He spun round. There was no one there.
"Stop tryin to scare me Argo!" It was the only thought he could come up with - his friend was messing him around.
Suddenly he heard a growl behing him and he spun around, to quickly. He fell over. He jumped up again and ran towards the base. After running for 5 minutes and not seeing anything he was getting worried.
An evil barking in front of him made him spin around again and run back the other way. But again he heard the vihsus noise in front of him and spun around. Every way he ran he heard the noise. Whatever was in the mist, it had him surrounded...
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