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Mr.X 05-29-2003 11:44 AM

Story
 
Abe's Odysee: Chapter 1: The Escape

One time all the muds lived in peace and harmony but one day it came. It was the 4th july 1981 everyone was gatherd in the town squre of oddsvile. For Abe a Mud he had been shping and then eating and work. But then the ground started shaking and before they new it all the muds where surronded alll exept 7 of em. Abe, Abe Babe, Salty Pretzils, Mr.x, and other inkown muds ran. About 7000 Glukens/sligs chased after em. Abe fell over but the others just ran. Before Abe could breath he was surronded and knocked unconcius. END OF CHAPTER 1


what do u think of it

Mr.X 05-29-2003 11:52 AM

Story
 
i am sory my last story whent wrong here is my new advanced story.

Mr.X 05-29-2003 12:05 PM

Story
 
Why I Live Like This

One day Abe was walking along minding his own troubles when suddenly he was attacked by 4 horrible slogs. Abe got away by jumping in the sea but he was never seen againby his freinds. Abe decided to live on an island. Things were going well the food was great, he had a tent even a coconut powerd radio. But it wasnt long until Abe noticed the passege. It started as a cave but then it turned in to a coridor then he was in a fancy cafe. He saw it was free all free to swim it was free to eat or drink it was free it was great or so he thaught. He was there for seven hours until he realised the other custermers were rupturfarms sligs. He tried to run but they got em. Now he live like a slave and thats how he became one.


How was it?

Hobo 05-29-2003 12:07 PM

This is in the wrong forums and you've made three seperate topics about it. It should go in fan corner

Fez 05-29-2003 12:09 PM

this should be in fan corner. And how the hell did u manage to post up 3 threads!?

Mr.X 05-29-2003 04:39 PM

News paper
 
THE DAILY ODD PAPER

IT BROKE FREE

Interns and vykers everywhere A vyker in a vyker pod
are terifided because a Gabbit rushed over to get him
broke free. And not just any after he was captured he
Gabbit no this one has freinds somehow got free and
the fuzzles. It all started one has been rescuing fuzzles
day the interns and vykers had and has been using them as
just caught all exept 1 of the attackers. Tell us if you see
Gabbits. After a hard day of him or his partner Abe a
taking Gabbit lungs out the Mudokon. CALL 09890-0987
Vykers and Interns thaught
there work was done but then
they where informed that one glucken qween needs lungs
more gabbit had been caught
in a bair trap. the glucken qween needs
lungs of munch the gabbit
please help her find him...

Mr.X 05-29-2003 04:53 PM

Poem
 
O is for oddworld
D is for decreasion in gabbits
D is for the destrution of rupture farms
W is for wanna-be-Gluckon
O is for oil made to run rupture farms
R is for Rupture farms (man i am saying rupture farms a lot)
L is for Lulu
D is for depretion in the mines

Zach Roy Wilson 06-05-2003 01:30 AM

Mr. X, you are on your way to unusually great sucsessfulness!