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lindsey 11-28-2002 03:43 PM

a shrink story
 
im going to post this you do the rest
abe was going to rupter farms to remind him of his old live

lindsey 11-28-2002 05:58 PM

some one post befor it gets closd srink fan geting mad

lindsey 11-28-2002 09:03 PM

here some more when abe gets there he gets hit by some thing and get kokot out help out and post the next part

sO fReAkIn oDd 11-29-2002 01:37 PM

I know you're new to the forums and you have a promising idea, but you seem to not know what your doing. I would recommend writing more than a sentence for an opening, a paragraph or two, try to give us something to work with. Also don't double post, and try to edit your posts before you enter them.