I dream my dead dreams
Ok characters...
Oryan:Main character, he's got a real cool revolver made of silver and all sorts of specail types of ammo for. He wears a big brown over coat and black boots.works for the YUID Eye color: green Hair color: Black Race(can't find the other word of it): Italian, english, and japanese Sex: Male Age: 27 Heckks:Cheif of YUID (Yorin Undercover Investigation Department) and friend of Orayn. wears a YUID shirt ( green long shrit with YUID in yellow on the front and Cheif on the back. ) and green pants. Eye color: brown Hair color: Bald Race: African Ammerican, english Sex: Male Age: 35 Dr. Francis: Inventor of the NecroThought machine and head scientist in the genetic enginering department. Wears a white lab coat, white shoe's a blue under shirt and glass's. Eye color: green Hair color: greyish whitish, hair only on the sides of his head Race: English, scotish Sex: Male Age: 50 Red: A good friend of Oryan's and a part of the back-up team for YUID, he's always making jokes and wanting to get some feild work and get some kills, he never takes his job seriously, he wears a black YUID shirt and a black cap with the words "Yorin Undercover Invistigation Department" trailing across the sides, black pants and black shoe's Eye color: blue Hair color: brown Race: Italian, english, scotish, eourpian sex: Male Age: 20 Kao-noshi assain's: Robotic assain's disgiened to kill and leave only the body as evidence, are programed to know all the tactics of their target, they are always armed with one projectile weapon and 4 katana's, little is known about these mechinized warriors beacuse few live to see or remember what they look like. Eye color: machines Hair color: machines Race: Made bye Dr.Francis sex: machines age: first seen in 2031 AD. And many more to come Synopsis: Its 2045 AD. Anarchy has taken over most of the world and an evil corperation bent on world domination is using hypnotized slave's clut members, undead, and genetic mutation's to do it. The YUID is trying to stop these people, sounds like your basic animish story... Items and the such: any items I would need to explain are right here, and the such Vidscreen: A digital TV. that is permently instaled in your wall. Vary's in size, and has a remote control that tells you whats on the next channel, and what ever you want about the programs on. It usaly has a clear blue case with chrome buttons and a small rectangle shaped remote that is the same color as the vidscreen, but the colors vary depending on what moddle. Communitactions Unit: As oposed to saying, "Were's the god damn phone!" you'd say "Were's the god damn CU!" Its a small chrome box with a stuby antenna at the top, a screen and 6 buttons, it store's call info and data files sent to you by other people witch you can load into your Computer Terminal. When someone calls you their name number and location (( it'll say like sector 5, the citys divied into sectors but you can use your computer teminal to find a closer vicintiy )). Computer Terminal: pretty much a PC installed in your wall. Its a big screen that the keyboard folds up onto, like a lap top, and a swivel chair sticks out from under it, its realy cool and such. Ok thats pretty much it, first part soon |
So far it sounds interesting, when do you put the first part up AS?
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Prolly thrus (tomrow) estern time, but It's gona be good
I'll update the info page as the story progress's, more characters, more items and such, and they'll be alot more on that page by the end of this story, so I', gona do a little sample thing. Oryan pressed the on button on his Computer terminal, he heard the ding and the words, aleart, you have 1 new msg, open? He click yes, the screen went black [::: reciving message :::] ............ [::: message recived :::] Opening.... Hello there Oryan, you have a new case, its around the Uope's weapon storge, a stake out, you need to find out who's been stealing the weapons from it. It's a solo, take what you want. [::: message end :::] He got up and turned the terminal off, he smiled and said "This is gona be good." He turned and walked out his apartment door, still smiling. pretty much a prolouge |
Look harder than you are
Oryan sat on a lifter outside the Uope wearhouse. He took out a tin flask of vodika and took a swig off it and screwed the cap back on, all the while looking at the building as he thought good sh*t man... he heard a sudden banging noise, like steel hiting steel, he got up a bit startled and put the flask in his brown over coat, his hands sliding over the brass buttons. He walked out and over to the wear house entrance and saw 4 Necro slave's banging at the door knob with a crowbar, one turned and looked at him, it then drew a bretta from his robe and pointed it at him. Oryan quickly drew his revolver and dove to the right and behind a box for cover, he waited for a shot, but all he heard was them banging. He got up and looked at them, he rose his revolver level to his eyes and aimed for ones head. BOOM. He turned around just in time to see the back door blow off its hinge's and a sudden burst of fire fallow it, then 20 Necro slave's hastefuly ran out the blown open entrance of the wearhouse all carying weapons and crates, he raised his gun to fire but he heard the sudden crack of a rifle and a sharp pain rush through his left arm, and just barely over the fading sound of the rifle he heard a pling somewere be hind him. he looked up and saw a dark figure pointing something at him, it's pale white emtionless face looked at him, it was wearing a sleeveless robe and a japanese style straw hat. He then realized, it had no face, only a white orb was placed were its head should be. It fired again. Oryan again dove doging the shot, he ran for the roof later and climbed it, the attacker droped its weapon and ran for the edge, stoping. Oryan reached the top and looked at it. "You got nowere to run, now turn around and walk slowly twords me." It did'nt even respond. He ran foreward, he knew he could'nt cuff him only shoot him. The thing jumped with amazing strength from the wearhouse roof to the apartment roof, it rose, and turned and looked at him, drawing a katana from underneth its robe, only the sword stuck out, none of its hands shown, it waited for him. He fallowed it and jumped almost missing the leadge, but he rose up and looked at it, he then relized "A kao-noshi assasin..." the assasin quickly rushed forward, its katana drawn, it was no more than 1 foot from him, Oryan quickly drew his own katana and blocked its attack. They went on in a small fight until Oryan hit the KNA's sword out of its hand. He laughed and said "Well, your not that good.." it then drew 2 katanas, preparing to fight. "Well..." it rushed forward and attacked with amazing speed and power, each blow like an lron fist, sparks flew every were, then it stoped and threw the robe off, thats when Oryan say what the realy were. Robots... He looked at it, a fule cylinder rest in its center, the rest plated in some place's with white armour, it jumped and landed in the streets and looked up at him. He yelled at it "Don't think your gona run!" he drew his reolver and said "I warned ya" he fired one shot, it went into the fule cylinder, the drone had one split seconed to look at the cylinder get peirced, then it blew into 2 parts, the top half slid down an ally and into the wall, exploding again, the bottem half stumbled back and forth on its legs and then fell over. Oryan smiled to himself in said "Not that easy to kill'a pro" he turned climbed down the fire escpae, and off into the night.
well, how did ya like the first part? Feedback please! |
It seems no one cares about this, so..
This is closed until I get a reply. Witch is not likey since no one cares... |
hey james, this is pretty good, like cowboy bebop/trigun kinda
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Oryan sat at his appartment table, siping a cup of coffie, watching the Vidscreen, it was a program on some spy. He heard the CU ring. He got up and answered it.
"Hello, Oryan speeking" "Oryan, whats this I'm hearing about an explostion at the Uope wearhouse!?" He heard Heckks yell over the CU "Sir! I'm sorry but I had a littile run in with a KN unit sir, I-" "YOU WHAT!?! HOW THE HELL ARE YOU STILL ALIVE!" Oryan grined, even though he knew that Heckks couldn't see his face "I blew it up" "......" Heckks was speechless. Oryan hung up and then walked back over to the table, siping his coffie and watching the Vidscreen |