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mitsur 04-12-2002 10:53 PM

A new enemy
 
This is a nex fic I made!I have many now!!!!!PM me if you want to help

Chapter one:A mysterious voice

Sith was walking on the beach
How peacefull....I think I shall live here he thought looking around.He spotted a patch of beach away from the tide and started digging.(He is making an under ground home that is quite comfortable)about two days later he had finished.It was hard but it payed off he thought inserting the final board to keep the sand from falling.When he had everything set,he went to bed and heared somone calling his name.

mitsur 04-13-2002 12:36 PM

Chapter 2:
Who was that?

Sith saw a light coming from the beach."what the..."he said."SITH.....THERE IS A NEW ENEMY!BE CATIONS AND DEFENED YOUR SELF!IT KNOWS I AM TALKING TO YOU!ITS WEACKNESS IS..."but it dessipered."Where the heck did it go?"Sith said

VykerSawBones 04-18-2002 10:21 PM

nice story Mistur your a good writer:fuzcool: Better than me hehe