My Poem
 

Time for some payback...Xinos!!!
I wanted to go fishing one day.
I asked my dad,he said "ok"
So i bought some bait.
The smell i absolutely HATE!

I went to the docks.
I put my bait on the hook.
i put the line in the water.
And felt a tug at the hook!

i reeled it in.
i knew i was going to win.
i tugged at the fish.
It was like Tug O' War!

i thought it was cought.
But it wasn't caught.
i pulled up the line...
Damn,i caught a bottle of wine!

:lol: good poem

CHEESE AND CRACKERS GROMIT?
 

right... it dident rime. Oh well. Poems dont nead to rime anymore... dam new life style:D. Liked it though! Whats whrong with a bottle of wine? I mean its just been... laying...on the bottom...of the... Right then! Cup of tea any one?

Uhm, isn't it meant to be Oddworldly stuff in here? Hence the title "fan corner"...

It's better than your first offering, anyway.

yeah its not that bad of a poem its pretty cool but add some more ODD stuff.:lol:

~You wanna here my poem~

a saw a slig with a nasty pig~~~~
it was sooo dam big~~~~
but then it ran away with its wig uh huh baby~~~
~~~how you like that~~~

nice poem sligface

Hehehe!
 

This is really cool peom SligFace202! You should write peoms for this section or something!

(800th post! Yeah!)


Mudokon101...

Some of you people must be really drunk and/or high, I find Sligface's poem to tarnish the name of poetry and literature... Dude, no offense, put some emaning into your stuff.