New AO map
 

Hi !

I've a great new !!! I'm going to create a level with my backgrounds !!!
But not with AO real elements !!!
With MY elements !!!

Here, my first map :

http://img4.hostingpics.net/pics/689566R111.png

And it's not finish !!!

That screen looks pretty damn good to me. :p

Thx

An other cam :

http://img4.hostingpics.net/pics/396127R121.png

Little story :

Abe and his friends work in a new company : Odessian Trains.
But they want to be free....So abe save theim dans destroy Odessian Trains.

Sweet. What program are you using to make these? :p

Also, I wouldn't say Abe works there maybe it's kinda like Exoddus, but I think a good idea for that and more reason he wants to blow it up would be like they're building train stations and tracks over sacred land (Necrum perhaps?). That means Abe would actually blow it up for a purpose rather than just for saving people.
I suggest as a slight back story, something like, Abe after returning recieved a message from big face to head back to Necrum. Then when he gets there, he saw a sign saying 'Odessian Trains build site! No tresspassing!'. Abe decides to follow the existing tracks back to the main building, and he gets in by climbing up and into an air vent. Then he breaks out and falls into the first screen of the game!
So, if you're wanting to follow this story, I recommend you put a story stone on the first screen somewhere to view the backstory (what I've just put) and a broken open air vent entrance. :D
Hope you like the idea!

Yes ! :) And I use PhotoFiltre (Free)

You prefer the fisrt version or this new version :

http://img4.hostingpics.net/pics/115658R1111.png

That looks better...
Is that green thing the vent? If so, I would've made it square and shiny silver, and move it more to the top left, and make it so it looks like it's been broken out of... :p

I change it