Dripik declares war!
 

After being kicked out of the Slig barracks, Dripik decided to hire Slig to build and create a factory to process Mudokon eyeballs, to recreate mullocks idea of new n tasty. Dripik invented a taste treat called " Mudokon crunchies" and had a processing plant called (youl corp.), all he needed was a industry to invest in time before Abe and is crew of warriors found out that Dripik was slaughtering Mudokons for tasty treats, back in Abes native tribe a Mudokon informant told Abe that the old Slig barracks genera( Dripik) was going to capture every single Mudokon, to make "Mudokon crunchies"... Abe quickly sprung to action and grabbed his toughest, biggest warriors to search of youl corp...
To be continued, all feedback welcome...

You do realise Dripik died in AE yes? Blown to bits by Abe. Also Abe doesn't have a native tribe. Sorry sport.

I know but im pretending he didnt...

"You do realise Dripik died in AE yes?" OR DID HE? Yes he did

Read post above yours...

He was quoting me.

post above his says your pretending, but ermm, your too new to be cocky

wow...just wow. that makes not sence at all

hoh kay, nice story, carry on, just forget about the dead thing, its a fanfic.

I was really hoping this was about or by the user Dipstikk for some reason.

This is a fan fic you know, it doesnt have to relate to the actual game.

well, the good ones will do, just reset the hero, the protagonist and the time and the fanfic will have better success otherwise, it's just made up dross.

How about more fanfic and see what happens to this version of Dripik?

Apart from the obvious (Dripik is DEEEAAAAD), your first installment of this story seems really rushed, as though you had to write this quickly to disarm a bomb or something.

ummm, yeah, i think we've made our peace with that.

Part 2
 

Abe and his warriors were search for many countless days and hours, until they came a empty packet of " Mudokon crunchies", once again Abe said again " we must be close" , after looking for a couple more hours Abe and his warriors came across "youl corp.", It was the most heavily guarded facility Abe had ever seen, it had 4 sligs on each corner of the fence surrounding it, and the fence was electric on touch and you to into ash.

Abe wondered if it is possible to penetrate "youl corp.", he watched for many hours trying to spot a weak point it the Slig guards, then a warrior noticed a guard lit a cigarette, and stopped patrolling, that warrior said " Abe now", then Abe quickly dashed into "youl corp.". Once inside Abe looked around and thought he was in rupture farms again because of all the meat saws,the saws were covered in Mudokon blood, this angered Abe very much, then he went to find "Dripik...

Feed back welcome, Part 3 coming soon.
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nice chapters,keep up the good work :)

Part 3 will be on by Thursday, sorry I havent be online I had HSC and work had to do.

Part 3
 

Edit: Sorry for double post and wait but it is finshed.


Abe was almost crying about all the Mudokon blood that he saw, but then he herd the click of a submachine gun and a Slig say " FREEZE". It was a stand off between Abe and the Slig aiming down his sight at Abes head, then a large amount of shots were fired and Abe new that one of his warriors had alerted and had been shot or injured. The Slig that was aiming at Abe lost concentration for a second so Abe decided to make a run for it he dashed with bullets flying passed his head and he finally made it to a shadow zone were he wait for the Slig to run by so he could take his Submachine gun and make a counter attack.

The Slig finally caught up and was about to pass the shadow...BAM!, Abe punched the Slig in the face so hard that his head was knocked clean of his shoulders. Abe wondered were all of that strength came from but he had not time to waste before other Sligs noticed the dead. Abe searched the factory until he came across a door surrounded with Sligs that were alert and watching carefully, Abe had another look and he saw Dripik pop his head to ask a guard for a cigarette, after observing for awhile Abe decided to use the Submachine gun to plough down the guards in front of the door. Abe made his move and was successful in doing so, he opened the door and came face to face with Dripik. Abe Said "Your evil has cost the lives of so many good innocent Mudokons, so I must end your life with a bullet in your head", After saying that Abe Killed Dripik and carried him to a meat saw and threw him in it.

Abe then sneaked out and only the fittest and biggest warriors survived the fire from the Sligs protecting the factory, they walked off in the darkness and hoped this would be there last war.

The End Feed back welcome.
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A side from the whole Dripik thing, This Fanfic ain't half bad :)

16-08-2010 < Dripik's dead
Today < Dripik's dead

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No but seriously, you are starting to develop a linguistic technique...of sorts. Nice to see some paragraphs that haven't been just slapped onto a forum post. Vell Doon.

Thanks, my next fan fic will have all new characters and some from past and some crazy plots.

It's ok.

Crazy plots must be done carefully, or it will be just like a crazy fest of schmuck talking.