My first story. Zulag 6
 

So, i am planning on making short stories based around the Abe games. So here's the first chapter to my first short story. Zulag 6. Enjoy (I hope).



Oddworld Shorts: Zulag 6


Chapter 1: Without Hesitation

It was only a couple of days after Abe, the mastermind behind the destruction of Soul Storm Brewery and the saving of 300 Mudokons was helping the Mudokon race get back together. But Abe was feeling curious as he was resting with the Mudokon Friends he was with. He felt the presence of a spirit, of a God of sorts. All of a sudden, Abe collapsed to the floor. Eyes closed, feet closely together. He was greeted by the spirits of dead Mudokons. Infact, the very same ones who told Abe to rescue Necrum Mines.
Abe listened to them. They said. “Abe, we have found the path towards finding more Mudokons.” This is the beginning of a new journey for you Abe. “In your mind you will see a path you know you should follow.” “Ignore the pleads of fellow Mudokons to tell you not to go.” “Zulag 6, is where you need to go Abe.” “There, you will meet someone important, who’s life, if ended, could end the Mudokon race itself.”
Abe replies, “But why me, now that I have rescued these guys, the powers of the Mudomo and Mudanchee Vaults have been lost.” “How am I meant to rescue them?”
“You will see, Abe.”
They left, and Abe regained consciousness. Then, without hesitation. Ran out the Rehab Centre. He quickly found the destruction site of Soul Storm Brewery. And then saw a big fog. Dense and yellow. Surrounded by trees. Abe went up to this, and saw a metal frame. Damaged, battered, bruised. Then wooden planks sealed it, saying, CONDEMED. As Abe went closer to inspect, he looked up, and saw that sign. Zulag 6.

So far, so good. The fanfics around here are all much better than I would have thought :P well done

Thanks dude. I will probably post the second chapter tomorrow. In the mean time, i will be thinking of ideas for the story. =)

Great story so far! :)

When you talk about Zulag 6 though, is that in SoulStorm Brewery or in RuptureFarms?

Soul Storm Brewery my friend. Should of mentioned that. Thanks for pointing out.
EDIT: Thanks for praise BTW :)

fantastic! although wasnt there already a zulag six in soulstorm brewery? i'm pretty sure there was 15, not 5, but anyway, brilliant so far! keep it up :)

Thanks =)