Just like you Imagined.
 

My second fan fiction. I hope you guys like it. its about the nature the native muds had before the industrial life came in.

Chapter one: Water that was once as clear as a sapphire,Now tainted Brown.

Kai awoke to go play with her friends. They were all mudokons. She ran outside smelling fresh air. But only to find her friends crying and weeping. "Whats wrong?" She asked. One of them answered. "The river.Sniff. Its...its.." "What?" She asked getting moderatly impaitient. He finally spoke up. "Its no longer clear..." "What!?" Kai said surprised. She ran to the river and saw it was a mirky brownish green color. She covered her mouth with her hand. She looked up and saw a slig pouring sewage and other wastes into the river. After he was done. He tossed the bucket into the water and looked at her. "Hey get outta here!" he said raising a baton. And with that Kai ran back to the village.


(Yeah srry if this doesnt turn out as well as my other fan fic a day in the life of oddworld. But i was in the mood for something different.)

Interesting. I wonder what happens next :D

No one knows :D except me lol

Chapter 2: trees replaced with stumps.

Kai went back to her village and told her elders what were happening. "Yes we Know Kai." The first one said. The second said "There is nothing we can do right now. All of our mudarchers are at the fortress." "But.." Kai said. "No but's Just dont worry about it." Said the first elder again. Kai slowly walked away and saw three or so slig's with rifles guard a Huge power saw. It started whirling around just above the sligs. It slashed and hacked tree's. A tear stremed down Kai's eye. A slig looked at her raised its gun at her and started yelling. "HEY DIDNT I TELL YOU TO GET OUT OF HERE ALL READY!? I SEE YOU AGAIN AND YOU WILL BE FOOD FOR MY SLOG!" The slig's started laughing. Kai ran away from them. She was running in the woods when she saw a herd of Scrab's running through. It was rare to see that since the sligs are capturing them.. The Scrab's Paid no attention to her as they galloped across the floor of the forest. Kai turned around and started heading back to the village. Ready to tell everyone what happened.

Need suggestions.

Don't triple post.

Dont come in my thread telling me what to do.

Its a rule. You can't triple post. I didn't make it up.

dude i know i was being sarcastic -_-

Sure.

see just like that was being sarcastic.