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Ramonsk8 04-02-2007 08:32 AM

Oddworld: Odd vs. Evil - Comicbook...
 
As I already announced, I'm currently working on a comicbook-series in Oddworld style. In that comic I'll show you what I think happened after SW...

I still gotta get used to drawing Abe, he's kinda hard. I bet he'll look better in the future...

Here's episode 1, hope you enjoy:

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...8/episode1.jpg

Matriar 04-02-2007 09:55 AM

Hey, this is awesome! :fuzgrin:
The dialoque of the beginning is cool, too. :D Can't wait to see the sequel!

Creepy Doc 04-02-2007 10:02 AM

Nice job so far, dude! :D

moxco 04-02-2007 10:39 AM

Nice job. I like how you make Abe look like an unfit weakling compared to Stranger. Are they going to meet Munch?

Alf Shall Rise 04-02-2007 11:25 AM

Cool, very cool, I think already know what's gonna happen. :)

Arxryl 04-02-2007 07:48 PM

heh! that's pretty funny! You are pretty good at drawing Abe!

ziggy 04-02-2007 08:12 PM

This comic book looks really interesting. Good writing, and your depiction of Abe is very good also. Make anotha one. ;)

Reiji Neko Mitsukai 04-02-2007 09:18 PM

Wow! I'm impressed! Looking forward to the next episode!

Ramonsk8 04-03-2007 07:12 AM

The next episode is coming later... Who is that person Abe's looking at, and where is Abe actually? And maybe a bigger question: Where did his tattoo's go?

moxco 04-03-2007 10:05 AM

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Who is that person Abe's looking at?

I wonder who? [Being Sarcastic.] By any chance could it be Stranger? [Being Sarcastic again.]

Ramonsk8 04-03-2007 11:03 AM

Hmmm... Maybe it's someone wearing his shoes, or it aren't his shoes at all! Or maybe, he IS!

moxco 04-03-2007 11:08 AM

Oh, I just realised, Ramonsk8 made this thread. I thought Oddjob or someone made it and you were asking the person that made it.

Ramonsk8 04-03-2007 12:49 PM

No haha, it's me... I'm trying to make you WANT to see the next episode

toxicity 04-03-2007 02:56 PM

Thats a pretty good Abe, I could never really draw him well.

snuzi 04-03-2007 03:28 PM

So far, I like the first issue. Although, you shouldn't make 'em that short, in my opinion. Each issue should be at least a couple of pages long, that way, you'd leave the people reading it wanting even more :).

Good job on it so far, though. I'm looking forward tor reading the next page.

Ramonsk8 04-03-2007 09:26 PM

Yes, I thought about making it lnger, but it takes kinda long to make those pages... I thought I better let everyone read something every 3 or 4 days, otherways there would be a couple of weeks between each issue... I guess...

Ramonsk8 04-05-2007 08:34 AM

Sorry for the time it's taking me to update the comic, I'm still working on the next few episodes... I'm sure to update at least in the next few days...

I have a LITTLE question... During Oddworld: Munch's Oddysee, the Vykkers were making things like Babychow and Butt-Flo and stuff... Now, after the Vykkers were defeated, did they stop the production of those items, or are they still 'in business'. I really must know for my comics...

Matriar 04-05-2007 08:44 AM

I guess, not all vykkers got defeated. Only the two which captured Munch.

Ramonsk8 04-05-2007 09:08 AM

So it's still being made, or did the production stop? I'll just act like they stopped the production, so one day when Stranger is at the bar and he wants to drink something the Clacker Barkeeper can say: "I've got this from an old stash, and it's 2.000 Moolah!" hehe...

Matriar 04-05-2007 10:44 AM

Heh, I like this idea. :) You can surely use it. I mean, it's your comic at last. New ideas would be cool!

moxco 04-05-2007 11:02 AM

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I guess, not all vykkers got defeated. Only the two which captured Munch.

Actually the whole of vykkers labs got blown up. That was only Vykkers Labs 12, theres probably other Vykkers Labs out there.
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That was only Vykkers Labs 12
Think of it like RuptureFarms 1029.

Ramonsk8 04-05-2007 02:01 PM

OK thanks... I'll see what I can do...

Matriar 04-06-2007 11:51 AM

Can't wait to see the next part then.

skillyaslig 04-07-2007 10:56 PM

That comic rokz!

Ramonsk8 04-11-2007 09:12 PM

Damn it's taking really long, got some things to settle first...

Slaveless 04-16-2007 07:37 AM

That was an excellent job of created such a piece. You left us off in a pretty darn great of cliff hanger. I just can't wait to see the next episode.

Hey, its OK with the problem. Look at me, I started a chapter for a fan fiction story, and I am still working on it for over a year now!

Matriar 04-18-2007 09:16 AM

Same here. Don't worry, I still look forward to it. :)