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name:lodmorka
speiceis:half scrab half muddkon
atributes:strong but not mindless
background: We'll first fix the story and then we'll contact splat.
Lokador is one of the three weirdos, he's the one in the middle. When the story takes place he is 14 in our years, he's a male half Mudokon and half-scrab, and he has light red skin he uses a staff that can be used as a key. (there will be no taking over people in this RPG.) This is the story: Living in one of the competitive facotries that may become rupture farms the glukkon and Molluck ~To Be Continued ~

NOTE: It was hard to write the story while talking on the phone so we stopped there, we are sorry for the temporary discontinue of this story.

Sorry to say it but i think that the law in "Allowed to make Rps??? PLZ read!" still works. You must seek a permission to make r.p.g.s in oddworldforums.

It will also be good if you readed "Information and advice for RPG newbies", and "New, detailed RPG rules. Everyone please read".

well thanks but do u like the story so far and who do i ask if u may i plz rpg

Talk to Splat about it. It would also help if you used correct spelling aswell.

Well, in my opinion, the plot is sort of hard to understand. Is this a story of Rupture Farms, or is this a story about destoring Rupture Farms? Also, there should be some rules for you to explain to us.

Actually...if you're gonna make an RP (follow the otheres directions first) then you've got to plot a story that people can get in to.
If you want to make a fan-fic, you've got to go to the Fan corner forum. Otherwise, form out your story so people can understand.
Welcome to the forums!

Sorry corromuddokon is not available right now as he is dissallowed from using the internet for the rest of the summer. I am here typing for him, and he says he will make the story shorter and with correct spelling and grammar for you all to understand, now if you don't mind, I'm going to go screw up his profile.

If you don't mind, mr. Corromuddokon-impersonator, his spelling and grammar are correct, and he was just using shortened versions. By the way, why has he been disallowed? Would you happen to be a parent? Or a school?

By the way, you spelled "disallowed" wrong.

I'm just his best friend doing him a favor, and thank you for correcting my spelling on "disallowed", do you think this avatar will make him angry?

his story has been edited!

Corromuddoken, if you want to start an RPG then PM me before doing anything like this.

At the moment your grammar is poor, the story is too short, giving no details about the RPG. A scrabmudokon lives in a factory that might become Rupture Farms. At some point he joins one of the tribes of Necrum. It would make a better start for a fanfic than an RPG. When you get back online, take time to participate in existing RPGs before attempting to make your own.

AND READ THE ALLOWED TO MAKE THE RPGS PLZ READ THREAD! I KNOW IT'S A BIT COMPLICATED, BUT PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE RAD THE FIRST POST AT LEAST BEFORE MAKING AN RPG

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