INVASION!!!!!!!!!
 

Oddworld's industrialists have run into an iron shortage, and they're looking for another planet to squeeze the life out of. They have spotted the planet *!@%&# in the *@!%$^ ##$ galaxy. Their computers malfunction, and they end up on a planet too close for comfort.


* im keeping you in suspense by bleeping the names (and NO it's NOT earth... oops i've said too much)


please tell me whether or not you like the story and i'll start writing.

That more of a very brief summary of an introduction. You could say things like, "Word about Magog Cartel's fear as been getting around fast. Study in the nearby worlds have been encouraged by the glukkons, but sciencists cannot seem to find an iron world, like their own. Vykkers have been preparing shuttles, to support passengers to the far off planet." Or something like that. A little more detail would be OK. Besides that, you left me with those naughty cliff hangers.

okay, i admit, it's my first fic. not only that, i've noticed everyone else does a whole chapter. i wrote a short intro instead of going through all that trouble of writing a long chapter and then being regected.