W.I.P Steefie pic. Needs help.
 

Hello... well, I'm doing this picture of Steefie from my fan fic, but I need the help of some of you Steef buffs out there; I can't get the face right... it looks, well, I dunno, un-steef-like to me.

The scribled lines are my sketch lines (you may notice I'm also having trouble with her arms T_T ). This was a multi layered picture, I just flattened it so I could save it as a JPG image and post it here. Also it's only about half the original size, so it doesn't take up too much space and all.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b7...incomplete.jpg

Well I like her. Think she's very good, but you need a real artist's opinion to be honest...as been as I have no drawing talent at all...

That is pretty good. The bottom part of the arm should be very bulky, a lot bigger than the top part of the arm.
The face looks good to me, I dont know how you could improve it.

Thanks guys/shellas. Yeah, I need to like... take the steroids out of her boobies maybe, and add them to her arms...

And you'll notice on her belt I got all unco-dyslexified (?!?) and couldn't draw the right hand horn in the proper direction.. I gotta fix that up too.

As for the face... I dunno, maybe it's just the way she's starring... she looks kinda creepy in my opinion :lol:

Hmm...Is that left armpit supposed to be that way? Looks a little messy IMO.

Her face is fine and the bottom part of the arm could be bigger, but other than that it is really good. Though she kind of looks psycho.

Edit: 100th post!

Her left or our left? But if you mean her left, those lines (the faded ones) are just me scribbling to try and find the right curve thing; on my original pic, those are on another layer while the dark lines are on a layer above those.

And thanks Daxter; yeah I agree she looks psycho lol.