The Fencer: Alector's story:
 

yO, i started to write a little fanfiction this week, i hope you like it!

Chapter 1:

A new day begins on the big Land and the golden sun rises over the mountains,
where a blue-skinned Mudokon watches over a forest. It's a Fencer, a fencer who
protects his world and believes in himself. The Fencer looks around the
mountain and calls too someone…: "Alector, come with me. We'll go hunting."-
a little boy jumps up to the big Fencer.
"Look, my son…do you see, the sun is rising?"
"Yes, father…it's great!"
" I want you to learn…to learn what I do, and learn to
believe in yourself!"
Alector looks at his father without saying a word. -" C'mon, we'll go watch
the Big Scrab herd!". The Fencer and Alector climbed down the mountain and
walked across a big field where little creatures sleep and live. "Can you
hear the sounds of the creatures…they sing and they scream." Suddenly Alector hears
a loud but quiet scream- "Did you hear that?" - "No, what did you hear?"
"Is this the creature you told me? The creature who has no feelings and no
face?"-
"I hope that we never meet this creature!" They both walk into the forest.
"Son, do you see that tree, it's one of the biggest tree of its kind on this world."
Alector dosn't look at the tree, instead he looks behind him and suddenly becomes
nervous.-"Son, what's wrong with you?" -"Nothing…I'm alright."

Alector and his father walked through the forest. Then alittle creature
jumps onto Alector and bites him in his ear.-"FATHER, WHAT'S THIS?!"-
Alector takes the creature and tosses it to the ground. His father sees the
'animal' and prepares to spear it! Then the little creature jumped a few steps back-
"I'm new here…my name is Electra, I wanted to hike across this
world…but…who are you?"-
The Fencer puts his spear away -" Are you one of our enemies?" Electra
looks at the Fencer and Alector -" I don't know." -Then he jumps away.
Alector stares at the Slig and shakes the head-"Father, was this a Slig…the
creature who can't talk?" His father close the eyes-"Yes, but no…he has
legs. Perhaps he'll be dangerous for us. He'll be a big Creature!"
-"Yes, can we continue our 'walking tour, father?" -
The Fencer begins to run…-"wait!"- Alector tries to run up with his father, but
he gets faster and faster -"Please wait!"- Alector can't see his father
now…-"Father????. Where are you???… HELLO?!"- Alector just hears his father calling far in the distance.
-"Alector! Come on, come and look what I have found here!"- Alector follows his fathers voice and runs to it.
He finally reaches the base of a little mountain, climbs to his father, and can't becomes astonished as he can't believe what he sees.

That's the biggest Scrab heard I have ever seen! -"Will it be dangerous when I run into
the heard?"-His father takes his weapon out, and stands up -"Yes!"- And runs into
the Scrab heard.-"What are you doing?!!"- The fencer runs to the heard of Scrabs, and
jumps onto one of them, then quiclky runs away and makes them confused. But some of the Scrabs see him and run to the
Fencer and try to attack him, but he's too fast. He tries to make the Scrabs
confused- so, that the Scrab heard runs to an other place and forgets the
Fencer…but the least dominat of the Scrabs will be there, still confused and this Scrab will be killed by
Alector.
The Fencer quickly runs back to the Scrab heard again. The Scrabs are so confused by his actions that they
run away without even thinking about protecting the other in their heard.
The least dominate Scrab is now alone and waits till the Fencer comes closer.
He attacks the Scrab quickly before it can attack him. Alector's father takes the
Scrab and holds it on the neck and on one leg- "Alector, take my spear and
come here!" -. But Alector dosn't know what his father wants him to do-"Ok"- he runs up to his
father whal he struggles with the Scrab. -"Alector, I want you to kill the Scrab!"-
-"What?!, I can't!" The Fencer looks at the Scrab -"Alector, this is the least dominate of the
Scrabs in the whole heard…and I want you to learn how to hunt and how to kill like a true Fencer so you can hunt your own food, when I should die!"-
Alector thinks about what his father just said, then glances to the Scrab, takes the
spear in the right position and thrusts the spear into the Scrabs thick body. The
Scrab screams and tries to kick them both. Alectors father holds the Scrab
down and snaps its neck -"You speared it wrong." -
"You'll learn to fight, my son. You will be a Fencer-"Alector smiles -"Yes!
I will!"

[ August 22, 2001: Message edited by: Alector ]

i like...

Human Resources Manager At OI: "dum de doo...oooh...Lorne, i've found a new writer"

lol...


can't wait for the next chapter...

Hi :D
Wooow Alector very cool story!
I like them!
I´m looking forward to see the next chapter!!!
Quick i want to see it! :D

Bye, TheBlueScrab

Hey, good story!!! :D

Ok, here's the next chapter of this big story:

Chapter2:

Alector and his father take the Scrab and go home. "Father, I never asked you this before…but why do you wear a tiara?" –"Son, I asked the same question to my father as I was once a child like you. You don’t get the tiara from other Mudokons or sacred things. The tiara comes from my heart and grown- the
more you learn, the bigger your tiara will."- "Can I also get a tiara father?" –"Certainly, my son…just wait…" -Alector smiles- "I want to be like you!" -They both walk back into the forest, through the fields and finally to their mountain. The Fencer lays the Scrabs limp body down, takes his spear and disembowels it.
-"Eeeew…father." -Alector closes his eyes-" Alector’s father takes the bowels-"-Son, can you take them and throw them away?-" Alector looks away and takes the big bowels of the Scrab and tosses them down into the little sea under the mountain. –"Oops….uuum father, I gave them to the….the hungry
Fleeches…!"–Where are Fleeches?"- Alector looks down and wipes the blood on
his hands off.

The Fencer looks behind him because he hears a rustling. He stands up and climbs a bit over their lair. "Father, what’s wrong?" –"Pssst !- be quiet."- He hears a quiet snarl.Suddenly a Paramite jumps without warning onto the Fencer’s body and tries to hurt him, but the Fencer squeezes the Paramite on the ground, then another Paramite comes and jumps onto Alector’s fathers back.

Alector takes his fathers weapon, runs to the Paramite and cutts
his head off. Alector falls down because the weapon is too big and has an
extreamly heavy weight. "Father, are you ok??!!"-His father is still pushing the Paramite to the ground. The Paramite dosn’t get air and it suffocates.
Alector looks to his father -"Wow….what where thoughs??" –"Thoughs where Paramites"-
Alector looks down at both dead Paramites, walks around them a bit, touches the leg of one Paramite -"…I’ve never seen Paramites before, you tell me so
much about creatures of this world, will I see them all someday?" –"Not
all, my son…but a lot of them are enemies and friends. "-
The Fencer begins to cough. "Are you alright?" He coughs louder. "Son, I
have an acute pain in my body…" -He closees his eyes and begins to scream as a result of the
pain. Alector holds his father "What’s wrong?? Are you ok??!" –"I’m too
old son…"- Alector holds his fathers hands and looks into his eyes -"No! You…but….you are
so fit and you don’t look that old…and I must learn so much from you…I want to
be a fencer like you someday!!"- Alector’s father coughs a bit again and stands up. "I feel a bit better now…thank you, my son!" -The fencer touches on his head- "I’m getting dizzy" -He quickly sits down and relaxes a bit. "Father, do you feel better now…can I go to the forest and make you a good tea when I
come back?" –"Certainly, my son…I will make food for us"- He smiles and
stands up again.

Alector takes the Fencer’s spear -"Here’s your spear"- and begins to climb
down the mountain. He runs as fast as he can so he can reach the forest quickly. On the mountain is
his father and he tosses the dead Paramites down off the big mountain in an
abyss. After this he holds the long spear and trys to climb higher on the
mountain. It begins to rain and the rocks get slick. Alector’s father gets
dizzy again and slips on the rocks. He dosn’t look at what he’s doing and falls down the cliff, landing on his spear. The long spear pierces the Fencer’s body. "Nooo,
A…Alector…I wanted to teach you more …for your life…"- He tries to get off
of the spear, but he dosn’t have a enough energy...then he close his eyes.
A storm is coming and Alector wants to go home to make his father the tea that
will cure him. He can’t walk any further because it’s a big storm and the rain whips on
his small body. He sits down in the field till the storm has stopped. He
looks around and sees a lot of little creatures who stare back at Alector and the
to the sweet herbs for the tea. "Uuuum…hello, you little creatures." The
creatures begin to jump around and try to attack Alector! He runs through the big
field and falls down, he quickly stands up and runs away.
Then he climbs on the mountain. It’s so hard to climb there…the rocks are
too slick! Alector chooses the other way and goes around the big mountain (it
takes a bit till he is finally on the other site of the mountain) .
He tyies to climb on the rocks and mud falls on his head. He’s now on the lair where
they both live. Alector runs around the place, searching for his father, but
he can’t find him. The rain stops. Alector looks upstairs and sees a bit of
the tiara of the Fencer "Father?" Alector climbs higher to the place where
his father is- "Maybe he sleeps…but it’s strange, he must sleep in the lair
and not in the rain"- Alector stands up after the hard climbing and looks at his
feet and hands.
They are red – "Is it the blood of the Scrab?"- Alector looks to the body in
the fog. He goes to the near of it and he can’t believe what he sees.

It’s his father, dead on the spear "Noooo!!!, don’t do this!" -He begins to
cry and shakes his father "No!!! That was my mistake! I went away from you
and left you alone!" -Alector shakes his father faster- "You can’t!!! You
can’t leave me alone in this world!!!"- He cries louder and begins to
tremble with fear. He reminds himself of what his father said a
long time ago: "When I should die, my son, take the tiara from my head away.
Don’t forget that!".
Alector sits down to his father and stares at him. He can’t see him so
good, his eyes are filled with tears. Alector gives his father a kiss on the
head and takes the tiara away. He holds his father till he disappears in a blinding
glare.

-"That’s not fair…you wanted to show me this world…" -Alector holds the
glare in his hands…but there is now a warm heat on his arms and hands.
"What’s going on here?" -
From the glare comes a lot of bolts, and it burns something into Alector’s eyes.
He screams from the pain, but he can’t move. The glare disappears in the air and
the heaven gets blue. Alector holds his hands on the eyes – "They are hot….I
have pain. What’s wrong with my eyes?" -Alector opens his eyes and goes to a
little hole what is filled with water. He sees big Scrars on his eyes. – "I
can’t believe it, I have such a kind of tattoos like my father on my eyes-"...

yey, good chapter Alec...

Hi :D
*schnif* *schnif* :(
*kreeeeeun*
Ohhh the poor Alector!
Saaaaad!

Bye

HI :D
Hmm..Alector i´m still waiting for the next chapter!
Whats up???
I want to see it!

Bye

Sorry, TBS...here's the third chapter:

Chapter 3:

Alector is still sitting down on the ground and stares to his own reflection on the water. He touches the scars on his eyes again and begins to cry –“father….what should I do with them?”
He can’t believe that nobody gives him an answer. He touches the place where his father died –“ there will someday grow a big tree over you!” The little Mudokon stands up and wants to begin a big trip. He hikes through a little forest, to the desert and finally to the ocean where he wants to sit down and pray. He was three days on the road and his feet are red and burned of the hot sand. He sits down on a little rock on the beach and wants begin to pray.

Suddenly someone touches his right shoulder- Alector jumps up and falls down with the back into the sand –“Who are you…argh!” a little Mudokon appears on the rockand looks down to Alector. He laughs because Alector looks too funny when he lays in the sand –“you’re funny! ” Alector looks angry –“Don’t laugh….this is not funny! Have you never learned to have respect for other creatures?! ” Thestrange Mudokon jumps down of the rock to Alector –“I’m sorry…give me your hand. I’ll help you.” Alector stands up and goes a few steps back –“oh, nevermind…what do you want here, and why have you disturbed me?”
-“hmmmmm- I just wanted to ask you something! ” Alector scrapes himself on the head- “then ask me what, I think I can give you a right answer”- The little Mud walks around Alector and looks to his head and back, on his chest and in his eyes –“you are so different…why do you have a white skin and so long hair? You have so much tattoos! ” He stares up to Alector. –“You are the son of the big fencer,aren’t you?” - Alector looks down to the stranger –“yes…but my father is…dead”- The other Mudokon slaps himself against forehead –“no!!! That cannot be! He wanted to cure a Mudokon in our village!!! ”The Mudokon jumps onto Alector –“You lie!!!”- He pushes Alector on the ground. He gets angry and kickes the other Mudokon off his away –“Why do you do this?” -he takes the big spear, the little Mudokon makes the eyes so open as he can –“What do you want to do with this big thing, take it away, or I call my father!”- Alector takes his spear away-“then leave me alone!”- He goes from the other Mudokon away, walks a bit on the beach and sits down on the next big rock.

He looks up to the heaven –“father, I’m a little child…I don’t want to be so small, then nobody will have respect for me!
I wanted to hurt the little Mudokon…but you would say this is not good and I should leave him…I’m talking to myself…” Alector looks down to his hands –“they are so small, they must be bigger!” He stands up and go to the ocean. –“I can hear the water, I think it’s the sound of your spirit.” Alector looks down and wipes a tear of his face off.
Suddenly he falls down and have pain in his whole body –“what’s this?! It feels like someone stretches my body!” He can’t open his eyes for pain, he stands up, but he falls down again. His feet get longer and his hands bigger –“help! What will happen with me?!”- He hits himself on his chest, the pain will never stop-. But suddenly The pain has stopped and Alector tries to stand up. He can’t walk so good, his body is so different all of a sudden. His head is bigger, but his hairs are really short for his body tall.

An other Mudokon watched the event and can’t believe it. He walks to the big Alector.–“Excuse me…” Alector turns around and looks to this Mudokon –“what’s wrong?”
-“nothing…nothing is wrong…but you are so tall and I bet you are a young Fencer” - Alector coughs–“ahem…yes”- he touches his hair –“they are too short”- The Mudokon smiles to him and goes to the big spear with the silver Stones on it. –“Someone has told me, that the next Fencer will have long silver hair, white skin, power and courage…”- Alector looks away and turns around again –“what is the name of the next Fencer, and what’s your name?”
-My name is Stew and the name of the Fencer will be Alec…Alector…or something, I don’t know.” Alector stares to Stew –“have you said Alector???” Stew goes two steps away –“hmm…yes, why do you ask me that? I’ll go now…I don’t have time and my childrens are waiting for me, they are hungry”- -“Ok, I just wanted to say I am Alector, my father is deseased yesterday and now I’m alone in this world…alone without friends, family and experience!”

Alector runs away without saying goodbye to Stew. On his way he sees a factory, he stops to run and looks to it. He walks down to the big buildings. Alector looks behind him and sees a lot of Mudokons. A Slig comes to the near of Alector –“WHO ARE YOU!”- The little Slig takes his weapon and want to shoot Alector. Alector kicks the Slig off his near –“don’t shoot me, that would be a mistake for you!”- Alector takes the Sligs weapon –“don’t shoot!”- The Slig don’t want to hear what Alector is saying and shoot into Alector’s chest!
He looks to his chest, but he can’t feel anything –“what’s that?”- The Slig can’t believe it and tries to shoot Alector again but he takes the spear and pierces the head of the Slig.
The Slig falls to his back. Alector takes the spear of the Slig’s head away and looks down to the many Mudokons who have seen what he done.

-“Don’t look, he wanted to kill me…but…I was faster”- He looks up and runs away of this place. He runs till he comes to a sea where he can see himself, he want to see what is happen to him because his forehead have a strange feeling.
He touches his forehead- he feels something, it feels like a stone…
Alector goes to the sea, sits down and looks to his own image on the water. –“On my head! There…there is a red stone, this is the beginning for my first tiara!”-

And here's the fourth chapter! *looks to the room...empty* pls read it...pls!!!

Chapter 4:

Alector touches his forehead again. "The day will soon end, I must find
a place where I can sleep." - His mountain is so far away, and Alector is extreamly tired.
He looks behind him towards the beach where he met the two other Mudokons,- "That was the
first day I met the two other Mudokons." - He stands up and walks over the beach a bit,
to the beginning of a forest where a little stream is cooling Alectors feet. He
sees the big trees and the little creatures that jump towards Alector and then
quickly away. Alector heads towards a really big tree with one huge hole in it. He
hoists himself up and lays down in the hole, and quietly tries to sleep so he can go hunting the
next day. After awhile he wakes up, stretches his legs and yawns. As he gets up he feels something on his
feet, something round and abit dented. He takes the round thing off his legs and gets out of
the tree to look what it is, because it is too dark in the trees hole.

He looks into his hands at the thing,- "It is an egg!" - Says Alector suprised. Alector touches it
and holds it to his ear. -"It's so cold" - He sits down back in the hole and begins to warm the egg. Then he closes his eyes and begins to quietly fall asleep.
After the night, Alector grabs the egg and walks back to the mountain. On the
mountain, Alector lays the egg on the mosses soft surface and makes it warm. He wants to go
for a while. Alector goes away from the egg, looks behind him and
jumps down pnto the rock under the mountain. -"I finally want to know, what is
happening to me!" - he shakes his head. Alector hikes across a big meadow with
flowers and strange herbages. He wants to collect a bit of them so he can make the
egg warmer. Alector walks through the big field till he comes into the middle of
it, where the biggest and best herbages grow. He sits down to the tender grass and smells
the fragrance of them. He begins to pick a bit of the grass. Suddenly he
hears a strange sound. It is coming from the heaven over him. Alector doesn t
look up to the heaven because he wants go back to protect the egg. -"Hey, you
there!" - Alector dosn't take notice of the strange remark and continues on picking
the grass. -"Hey you white and strange Mudokon, have you ever ate a bomb?" -.
Suddenly something flies down, heading towards Alector, and watches what he is doing.
It's now just barly above Alectors head, but he still dosn't look up to it. The
thing gets nervous,-"Hey!".-"Do you wanna see a nice bomb, flying into your
face?" - Alector quickly looks up and stares at the strange thing. It is a flying
Slig who has found Alector randomly on the field.-"Who are you, and what do you
want to do?"-. The Slig flies a up abit again,-"You look so strange, do you
have red blood?"-. Alector gets angry and stands up, but the Slig can't see
the anger on his face. He just stares up at the Slig.-"Why do you
stare at me??, I'll bomb your head off!"-.

All of a sudden Alector jumps up to the Slig and grabs his neck, the
little Slig tries to fly away, but Alectors big hands are pulling the Slig down. Alectors eyes get white with a glare. The Slig begins to panic and wants to
get away from Alectors hands, after this Alector tosses the Slig on the ground and
jumps away as fast as he can. The Sligs pants explode with him and the shreds
are flying through the air. One peice hurtles towards Alector and hits him on his arm. He dosn't know what has just
happened, he just feels pain on his arm and holds it with his hand.
Alector looks down at his arm as blood drips down it! Blood is tripping out of his arms and but their isn't much of it.
Alector closes his eyes and thinks about something that can't
hurt him, he dosn't know what is happening with him, his hands get warm and his
fingers turn light blue, and the pain slowly goes away! - Alector looks at his arms, the
wound is gone! No blood or pain anymore! He stands up and collects the
herbages from the field so he can go home to the egg. The day has gotten really hot
and he must remember that he should come home till the sun is in the middle of the
day, or else the egg will be die in the heat of the sun. Alector walks back
to the egg to watch over it and to see what will happen. He looks behind
him and thinks,-"Now where am I?"-,-"Where is the ending of that big
field?"- he runs back to the place where the Slig died but he's not there!
-"Where is the Slig?"- he turns around again and again, but he just sees the
big field with the herbages.
He decides to run across the field just in one way. Alector runs for a very long time
without to stoping. He sees the ending of the field and runs away from it.
Suddenly he trips and falls down a rock and lands in the middle of a huge Paramite herd.
He quickly stands up and runs through the heard, the Paramites begin to run
after him. Alector is in the wrong place as alot of Paramites chase him
around a big strange area. He can't find anything to climb up.
He runs faster to a place with a shallow but big stream. Alector jumps into
the stream and stops running, he turns around to the big Paramite heard and
holds his left hand in the air,-"ALOS!"- He tries to raise his hands higher
in the air and calls the name of his father again,-"Alos". A light comes
down from the heaven and into Alectors hand, it is a light with an extreme heat.
He has now a big ball on his hands fromed from the light, that he'll toss to the Paramites who are
coming near him.

The creatures didn't stop running twoards him and went to attack Alector, he takes the
ball of light and tosses it into the water, when it hits ground the light flies up to
the heard and kills them all. Alector falls to his knee's it the water and can't
believe what has done. that's one of the same powers my father
has! -"He gets up again and takes a step back, he has to walk over the dead
bodies of the Paramites to get home. He runs again up to the field, through it and
finally back to the mountain where the egg is waiting for him.
After he climbs up the big rocks he goes to the egg to lay the herbages on it.
He sees the little nest where the egg lays but, it s empty! Alector trys
to find the Mudokon or Slig or something of the egg.-"Maybe an enemy came
and stole the baby!"- He looks down in the green grass to find it.

He sees something moving among the flowers nearby. Alector goes to the small patch of flowers and sees a little Mudokon baby with purple skin, he sits
down next to it and takes it into his warm arms.-"You are a different species,
your ears are so long like a bat."- the little Mudokon cuddles into Alectors
arms and sleeps. Alector smiles and says-"I'll call you..."-
He touches his head and looks to the big ears,-"Melas"-.

wow, you write wicked storys...

*puts gold medal round Alec's neck*

Hey Great Storie Alector! Keep up the great work I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hi
A very great fanfic!
I want to see more! :D

:D :D :D :D cool story

Great story! Um... just wondering... is Alector white for a specific reason? Just curious.

Vera: Hmm... nice. You know, my only two friends were killed by a Slig. So, Alector, I know how you feel.

I can give you the answer for it because Alector told me so much about her story and 'bout Alector (the mud) that i know a bit of it.
Every Fencer has an other skin-color, Alector has a white skin (don't know why). His father had a light-blue color, perhaps his mother too.

Ok...i hope i told it right...yeah, great story Alector. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

TBS http://www.duhspot.com/users/smiley/...otn/pmail3.gif

Thanks TBS, Alectors mother had a skin color like a human.
Here is the fifth chapter...sorry that i took so long:

Chapter 5:

Melas is still sleeping in the arms of Alector. He’s really small for a Mudokon baby, that’s a bit weird for Alector – "I don’t know what I can do with you…I never had a little child in my arms before…this world is too dangerous for you."- He lays the little Melas into the smooth grass and looks a bit towards him. He would like to know what Alos would do if he’d found a little egg. The sun is rising and then they will go to the end soon. Alector takes the baby gently and lays it into the moss. He sits down and tries to sleep, but he’s not sure, it’s better when he’s wake. Now, he never wants to have an enemy come and kill or steal Melas. Alector watches over him the whole night.
But he can’t do it every night, it’s impossible. He thinks of what he can do in this tricky situation and walk a little bit over a shallow puddle of water on the Hill. –"What have I done, that I must grow up so fast?" He goes back to the lair and takes his spear and points it at Melas. He wants to kill Melas, because he won’t have time for him in the future. He’s ready to pierce the big speart through the little body of Melas, but Alector begins to tremble a bit and lets the spear fall down at his feet.
-"I want to be a Fencer…and not a murderer! "- Alector takes Melas to his big arms and walks to the shallow water again where he thought about the little Melas and what he almost did.
A few minutes later Alector takes the warm water and gives it to Melas then touches the ground of where the water once lay. Suddenly flowers and grass grows upto Melas and bed him.

Alector walks three steps back and touches the red diamond on his tiara with his hands and closes the eyes. He rubs his hands till little sparks and glitter appear on his big palms. He opens his hands and the big glare comes out to the heaven and lets Melas disappear in it. One just can see Melas, body floating through the air. It’s getting taller. Alector just hears Melas crying. He tries to open his eyes, but the glare dazzles both of them. Alector closes his eyes again, then quickly turns around. His eyes are a bit hurt due to the glare. Then he sees the heaven turning back to a normal colour. He looks behind him and sees a small Mudokon boy sitting down in the water. Melas looks up to the big Mudokon and then at his hands. He tries to stand up, but he falls down because his body is new for him and he never stood before. Alector goes to Melas and helps him to stand up. Melas stands up unsteadily, as he’s never stood on his legs before. He looks up to Alector and begins to laugh. Alecor looks at Melas –"Why do you laugh?"- Melas opens his mouth, takes a deep breath and wants to say a word, but he doesn’t know how to say anything. He makes strange sounds but he can’t say one word. Alector laughs and lays his hand against Melas’ forehead.
Alector’s hands gleams on Melas’ head. Melas falls down and says: -"ooouch! What have you done?"- Suddenly he touches his neck and tear apart his eyes. He can’t believe what Alector has done. Melas stands up again and tries to walk, it’s still not easy for him. Alector walks to the little Melas and holds him so that he can’t fall –"You’re still small and you have to learn a lot!"-

Melas nods and walks around a bit on his new legs. Melas hears strange sounds next to him. He looks down into an abyss, but he can’t see anything. Suddenly something hurts him on his leg, blood starts dripping out of it. Melas steps back. All of a sudden something hurts him on the other leg over and over. Alector runs to Melas and goes out of the grass. They both look into the little meadow. Alector takes a little stone and throws it into the meadow. Suddenly Fleeches comes out of the grass and attack them both. Alector grabs Melas and runs away from them. He throws Melas on a rock that he can climb on it away from the Fleeches.
He takes his weapon out and cuts all tongues off of what comes near Alector. Another Fleech is behind Alector and hurts him on his back, he turns around, grabs the tongue of the Fleech and smacks it on the ground.
The Fleech screams. He looks at the bowels of the Fleech and walks to the others.
Alector takes the Fleeches without tongues and smashes them into the other few. The little meadow is bloody and the bowels of the Fleeches lay on Alector’s feet. He kicks them all down the abyss. Melas sees all the bowels, the bloody grass and Alector with his bloddy hands. Then he climbs down to Alector –"They hurt my legs…"- Melas shows Alector the flesh on his legs, they are red. Alector smiles at Melas and touches the big wounds. Melas: "Oooouch!!! What are you doing!!??" He grabs his head because of the pain and closes his eyes –"Stop it…that’s terrible!!"

Alector: "That’s not terrible…you’re crying…that’s really terrible!" Melas stops crying and sees what Alector is doing to his legs. Alector: "It’s better you look away or hold your hands over your mouth! " Then he grabs into the wound, a heat is going to heal his legs. Melas: "Aaah!! Stop,stop, stop!!! That’s enough! Please stop it!" Alector gets a bit angry about Melas’ loud sounds –"Now be quiet, that really strains my nerves!" He takes his hands off Melas’ legs –"Now…can you see it?"
Melas looks at his legs –"Oh, WOW! You’re a healer!!! That’s unbelievable!!! That’s cool!"- Alector stands up and shakes his head –" You’re just too young to understand this, my life is fate. It’s not funny or cool. Perhaps someday you will learn it too."-
Melas: "What’s your race?" , Alector- "I’m a Fencer…it’s not a race, we’re just normal Mudokons, but we have to do something in this world. Our generation will live and watch over the land forever!"

Melas nods and grins. –"I think you are a great Fencer then…I don’t know what this is…but I will learn it soon!"
Alector: "Yes, Melas you will learn a lot of things in this world! But first you must wear what; *coughs*...you're naked"...

das ist geil!

WOW!! What a great story!! Keep writing Alector!!!
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The story is really interesting, Claud! when are you gonna post the next chapter? I'm looking forward to read the continuation of this part!
keep writing Alector!

TBS

Ill be here waiting for you next Chapter

WOW! Ace story Alector! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

whens the next Chapter gonna be.............

Alector did you abandon this story

Just so you know, Alector's German, and it sometimes takes her a while to write fic, as English isn't her first language. Just be patient.

I know Teal, I know shes Germen, I'm just really aincious, THIS STORYS' AWSOME :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

Ey lec,
i know that u work on the next chapter... and have u finished it?
I hope that because i can´t wait so long.
HeHe, cu later Claud!

TBS

[ December 06, 2001: Message edited by: TheBlueScrab ]

I know RIGHT Claudia is one of the best artists of Oddworld FOrums and one of the best fanfictionists of oddworld forums :biggrin:

Soory for trying to rush you...Alector......It's just that your stories are so exiting!!!! :eek: :D

Ok, guys here is the next chapter!

Chapter 6:

A short while after the event, Melas is still sitting on the rock which is getting hot due to the heat of the day. Alector washes his hands on a small waterfall, what is conducted of a waterhole on the top of the mountain. At the top half of the mountain blows a coolish wind at times that the body of little Melas encases. He looks reproachful down to the white Mudokon -"You said to me, that I shall wear something, because I’m naked…"

Alector returns his comment -"I’m sorry, I forget alot of things at times and thats what I said to other people before." -Melas says: "How did you made your loincloth? Did you make it yourself, or did another person make it for you?"- Alector climbs up to where Melas has been sitting for a long time, takes his hand and pulls Melas down from the place. –" What do you intend? It’s painful enough for me to walk naked through the world!"- Alector: "There’s nothing that I havn’t seen on a creature before that I haven’t seen on you, besides I wanted to show you a plant that produces the substance that we need to make our loincloths in the wild." They both walk till they reach a big plant with long brown threads. The threads resembles cobwebs, they are just much longer and easy to treat. The threads are so big, that they just need one of them to make a loincloth. Alector pulls one of these threads till it quietly detached from the plant. He combs the stuff with his long nails till it has a smooth surface. Then he wraps it around Melas bottom area and ties a big knot. –" Ok, that was easy, is it suitable?"- Melas jumps up and down–"Yes, it is!"- Alector grins –"That’s good, we can walk back then!"- The little Mud with the big ears walks behind Alector as fast as he can because he can’t take such big steps like Alector. On a high rock, Alector gives Melas a small weapon –"I want that you look out for a while, Im gonna go away for a short time."-

Melas nods and sits down, then turns his gaze to the bloody meadow where the Fleeches attacked both Muds a short time ago. Alector is already on the road to find the plants that grow under the sand of a desert. Some hours later, he is on the small desert to search for the little plants. He forgot that this place is very dangerous due to the heat, the warm air, and to the creatures who live here. But he ignores the danger to get home again. The place smells sweetish, almost like death. He grubs for the plants in the hard, hot ground of the desert, finds them and finally packs them into small bags on his loincloth. He was ready to go when he heard a quiet voice. It’s the voice of a little child. Alector turns around and sees a big hole in the ground. He walks over to it and looks into it. The hole is so big that it looks like a small lair and in this lair is a little Mudokon child with a dead Elum next to it. The child is crying -perhaps it was the owner of this Elum-.
The inside of the hole smells terrible –"Hello, what has happened to this Elum and why are you still sitting here in this dangerous place?"- The child does not reply. Alector leans toward the Mudokon child, holds out his big hand, and places it on the cheek of the small Mudokon. A tear flows into Alectors finger and then stops flowing. He holds the other hand out under the hand with the tear and lets the tear trickle of the top hand, but it doesn’t fall down to the ground, instead the tear hovers in the air between Alectors big hands.

The little child wipes the tears from its big eyes and stares up at the tear floating in the air. Alector doesn’t say anything, he just wants to cheer the mud.
He closes the hands with the childs tear still in his palm. He waits till rays shine out of his hands and then throws the tear into the air. The tear is now like dust and it gleams over the both Mudokons, it falls slowly on the ground and lights up the ground. Grass and plants are growing on the hard desert ground around the big bole, the child, and Alector. The grass covers the dead Elum and the child begins to smile. This was a new thing to see for the child Mudokon. Alector stands up –"You can’t stay in this place, it’s better you go home now!"- He goes away from the smooth grass back to the hot sand of the desert to walks home again . A few steps away he hears strange sounds. The white Mudokon turns around and sees a child throbbing on the ground with a stone. He walks back to it –"What are you doing now?"-. The mud looks up to Alector without saying a word and continues to hit something. It’s trapped on wire and can’t move from its place. Alector hasn’t ever seen something like this before and tries to unleash the leg of the child. The wire is so pungently, that Alector is hurting himself by touching it, while the child looks around at the horizine, it sounds like a loud thunder. Little stones on the ground are moving back and forth. The small Mudokon looks towards a big hill far in the distance. It can’t see anything, but someone is running down it. The thing runs closer and closer to the group without stoping to slowdown. The kid suddnely realizes what it is – it’s a Scrab –"Is a Scrab so heavy, that it makes the landscape shake?"-

Alector looks to the child –"What? Where is a Scrab? why didn’t you tell me sooner?"- The child just shrugs. Alector says –"Quite arrogant…"- He stands up and pepares to kill the Scrab.
Suddenly more Scrabs appear on the hill in the distance. The first Scrab stops and is waiting for the others. More and more Scrabs are running down the hill till a gigantic herd of Scrabs runs through the small desert towards them. Alector grabs the wire and tries to pull it out of the hard ground, but his hand slips and is sliced open. The Scrabs are gaining speed and are nearly at the spot where they are. Alector demolishes the wire, grabs the child and jumps as fast as he can over the big hole. The herd is now running over the shrivelled hole. Dust from the shaking caves it in quickly. Alector runs as fast as he can as the gigantic herd is gaining on him and the rumble of the ground gets harder and louder. The desert seems to be getting longer and the hot sand is rubbing agianst Alectors feet.
In front of them is no way out because an abyss blockades the exit. Alector quickly decides an other way, turns around and runs into the huge heard of Scrabs. On the other sides are alot of gulches where he can jump over it and perhaps they can absend to the other side. A few Scrabs are jumping to Alector and try to attack him, but he just dodges them quickly and kicks the Scrabs away what are in front of him or running to his near. One Scrab has been chasing Alector for awhile and he fears its going to catch him. A gulch is in front of them both. Alector wants to jump, but the Scrab kicks him. with that they fly with the Scrab into it. He just can catch the wall of the gulch and slips down till he can hold tight on it. He rips his hands on the wall and blood begins flowing down his arms. Alector looks up towards the top of the gulch and sees the big herd jumping over it. Most Scrabs are slipping on the edge and disapearing into the abyss.

The last Scrab jumps too late and bounces on the wall over the Muds, it falls down towards Alector and cuts a deep wound into Alectors shoulder as it continues to fall into the dusty darkness.

Alector falls a little bit, but he can grabs the wall tight and stops slipping. He holds tight with the left hand, on the right arm dangles the Mudokon kid. It’s hard for him to hold tight because his hands are just bloody clots. –"Try to climb on my arm and hold tight on the wall!"-
The child tries to get the wall, but the arms are too short and the blood makes the hand and the arms so slick that the kid slips down every moment. Alector tries to heave the kid, but it slips down even more.
All of a sudden the Mud grabs the wall, but it shuttles. It slips so fast, that Alector just holds his finger in his hands –"I can’t…I can’t hold you!"- The mud looks up to him and whispers–"Please help me."- it slips more and more till it falls down the gulch. The child screams while it falls into the depth. Alector tries to catch him, but for nothing –"Nooooo!!! DAMN!!!!" He climbs up to the top of the gulch and walks slowly to the hill where the herd ran down. He still can’t believe what has just happened to this little kid.
Alector walks till he reaches the hill –it looks so much bigger as far in the distange, it looks almost like a mountain.
His feet are burn like fire and the hands are so gluey of the blood, that the sand is fixed on them. On the top of the hill is a coolish ground without sand. There is grass!
Alector walks to see more, but there is nothing, it looks like a gigantic abyss without ending. He sits down and looks over the it.
Suddenly he smells flowers and hears sounds. Alector stands up again and walks on the grass. There’s a big valley. He sees Mudokons walking to forests, he sees villages, waterfalls – it almost looks like a paradise!

-Alector doesn’t know what he have found…but he’ll findit out!-