Geo's Life on Oddworld
 

Another fan fiction. It's about a human that had strangely ended up on Oddworld at age 12.

Chapter 1-The Beginning

Hello. My name is Geo.
In this story, I'll tell you when and how I started my first life on Oddworld.
It began kinda like this.
I was in Phoinex, Arizona with my parents when I was twelve.
My parents told that since I have done all my jobs around the house early, I got to go outside.
It was a beautiful day outside. Seventy degrees, not a cloud to be seen, and there was a cool breeze.
This first thing I decided to is to go through some nearby canyons, for they were fun to walk through.
But when I arrived there, the canyons were out of site. It was just a plain, desert valley.
I also saw what seemed to be a man fully covered in a cloak, and the face-hole was pure blackness.
"Hey." I said. "What happened to the canyons?"
"We have no need for canyons here. So I made them all dissapear." Replied the man.
"You evil person!" I exclaimed.
"You'll find things more exciting than just canyons in Oddworld." Replied the man.
"Oddworld? What is Oddworld?"
"It is a new world that my father told me about before he died."
"Please tell me how to get there. Oddworld sounds interesting."
"Are you sure you want to go there?"
"Absolutely!"
"If you wish."
The cloaked man held his arms in the air.
A huge, yellow hole appeared in the sky, which shined on the cloaked man and I.
"Brace yourself!" He yelled.
I was being sucked into the hold, along with the man.
I had sceamed, and then, everything just turned white for a while.

That was cool! I like the plot! Please finish!

Chapter 2-On Oddworld

I slowly opened my eyes.
At first glance, I knew that I wasn't in Phoenix anymore.
"Welcome to Oddworld." Said the cloaked man.
I slowly fell to the ground and buried my face in my hands.
"What have you done! What have you done!" I yelled.
"You said this is what you wanted." Replied the man.
"Must...go..back." I wheeped.
"Well, um, we can't." Said the man.
"What do you mean?"
"When a human arrives on Oddworld, for some odd reason, it can't go back on Earth. Maybe I should have told you that before I let you-"
But before he could finish his reply, I fell to the ground in tear.
The man seemed to be carrying a whip, so he whipped me on the back.
"GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!!!!" He yelled.
I got up all shaky and slow.
"You're a big crybaby, boy!" He yelled.
"I AM NOT A CRYBABY!" I yelled. Then I punched him.
I ran off into a forest.
"Mom? Dad? Where are you guys!?!" I hollered.
Suddenly, a slig went up to me.
"HALT!" It said.
Luckily, I didn't see him. Instead, I trampled over him.
I went deeper in the forest, hoping to find a way out of Oddworld.

Great chapter Slig guy 101! Please Continue!

I like the likes where this is going! keep it up! :D

I like your idea, Sliguy-I've always wondered about what it'd be like if a human were to be on Oddworld as well, so I can't wait to see where this story goes. ;)