the end of oddworld
hi there
we are all glukons and muds isnt that nice to know and this story will take place as 2 sides glukons and muds 10 people can join 5 on each side this story will not start until where are an even team eg 3 gluks and 3 muds the name of the place and a minimum of 2 people on each side .the name off the place will be decided by the gluks so gluks give me names and the one I like best will be picked only 2 names per person.the gluks will decide something that could wipe out oddworld and the muds will have to invade it that will be decided by them and what weapons they use will also be decided by them I will start my character discription. first start off by saying which side you are on and in the teams you will pick the leader I am the leader of the gluks and the leader of the muds will be decided by that team ok. I am on the gluks side name:mr glocker age:40 likes: paramite pies dislikes:employees who slack off coat colour:blue eye colour:red so please join it will be fun |
Why would glukkons want to wipout their own planet?
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This RP, i' sorry to say it, has not got a really good plot. Of course it will be hectic and action-packed in the start, but it wont last for long.
An RP should never start in the action, unless you know how to make it, so that the plot will last. An RP should always start slowly, and the action later. I will keep an eye on the RP, if it's terrible... then i'm probably gonna do something about it. Like Oddish said, why would the glukkons wipe their own planet out? |
well the gluks are going to put a timer on it and they have spaceships to fly up to a lab a bit like vykers so the muds will be wiped out for good.but it will start off slow the gluks will chat about their next nasty plan that will the thing to destroy oddworld a mud overhears the chat when he is cleaning outside the meeting room where everyone and I mean every intern slig and all that apart from the muds.then the mud cleaning up runs out of the place and tells his mud friends about the plan
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Why would the Glukkons do that? Their goal isn't to kill the muds or destroy Oddworld, it's to make money. And they can't make money without a planet to live on.
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but the vykers labs like thing they are going to is where they save their moolah like a money box
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sorry but, you can't buy much without a world to live on. maybe you should change it to destroying modus. not that i can make better RPG's.
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And with no Muds, where will they get their slave labor?
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Exactly. You need to plan out your RPG's.
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ok then change it to destroying mudos and the vyker like thingy can drop them off on the other continent and what about slave labour they will be dead unless the plan can be stoped by the muds duh
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Okay!
Name:Leny Age:36 Likes:Scrab cakes Dislikes: Muds Coat colour:Blue Eye Colour:Red Oh and he's a Glukkon. When can we start Stingbee? |
I'll join in:
name:Rozzy age:28 likes:Work, Smoking, Doing busisness dislikes:Nature, Mudokkons, Spirits, Mudokkon pride coat colour:Yellow eye colour:Orange He is a glukkon, BTW. |
and if you sign up as a mud leave out the eye colour and change coat color to loin cloth colour
the name of the place will be glocker gases so lets start receptionist:anouncement from mr glocker mr glocker:all employees arpart from scrubs please report to the meeting office that will be all the rest will continue when a mud signs up so please join im running out of patience |
This RPG is doomed to get closed, if it's too silly. I'll keep an eye on it. And all of you, you need to learn how to make your posts longer, more understandable and more describing.
PLease, if you have any questions, PM me. EDIT: Ok.. i'll join, but i'm doing it to see how you guys are doing. I'll post if there are any problems in the you RP. |
loads of sligs and interns are walking through the doors to the meeting office
t-nex(no name yet):whats going on here big bro slig:get back to work slacker private meeting with mr glocker felow employees says mr glocker today we are here because the gluckons have decided to destroy mudos but dont be alarmed we have pods ready to take you to the moolah vault you will get your pay and then we will be going to denaton where a new glocker gasses is being built right now to blow up mudos we will use the timetech 5000 it has a timer and is powerful enough to destroy mudos so you have 2 days to collect your personal belongings and bring them to the pods so you all like it I guess nothing will stop us now and no slack off scrubs will be required robots will be our slaves this is the best plan ever hahaha |
OOC: Well, i'll create a lil' profile then... *sigh*
Name: Kyle... Age: 23 Likes: slacking off, like the rest of the Scrubs... Dislikes: Sligs, Glukkons and Vykkers. Whate else? Bio: Looks like a normal scrub, and has normal loin-cloth. ---- "Uh, private meeting? That sounds exiting..." Kyle replied to the big Slig. He looked around. there was noone to be seen, so he turned around and ran away.Then he stopped, as he saw on of the doors, being open to the meeting-room. "Hey..." he said, and looked hungrily at the door. He approached it, and slowly stuck his head in. The glukkons didn't seem to notice him. He heard the message, Mr. Glocker told, and suddenly he felt his heart sink. "That can't be anything but bad." he said, gulping. He remained there, not knowing what to do next. |
kyle ran off out of glocker gases when the meeting was on he spoke to his mud friends and told them what was happening meanwhile back at glocker gases
you may all do as I said now said mr glocker |
OOC| Ehm.. i'd prefer if you didn't control my character ;)
Kyle had run off to his friends, and told what he had heard. "You serious about this?" a mudokon asked, with the mouth widely open. "Yea, we must do something about it, or all of us will blow up." Kyle said, and making sounds of an explosion. "Ok... So how do you think we can stop the bomb?" the mudokon asked. "Well, i'm working on it." Kyle said wondering. |
that meeting was great said mr glocker what! he shouted one of our scrubs is missing hey you big bro slig over there grab a couple of you'r big bro mates and go on a search for a missing scrub now
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"Ouch oh!" Leny says as he goes to his mud freinds. "Coughed and sneezed on the floor, 70 whacks!" Then kyle told him the news. "We have got to stop him!"
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Really sorry! Real one:
"HAHAHAHAH!!! This was a perfect plan Mr. Glocktor!" Leny says smoking a cigarette. "Sir! Sir! A mudokon called Kyle knows the plan!" A slig said. "Attation all sligs, Exteranate Kyle and his freinds!" Leny says into the microphone! |
must relax evrythings going to be fine mr glocker repeated to himself and almost chocking on his cigar
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I'll join.
name: jeremy age:25 likes: scrab cakes dislikes: coat colour: purple eye colour: orange Note: Jeremy is Mr. Glockers brother. "Hey Bro, can I borrow your shower cap?" Asked Jeremy. He sighed knowing that Mr. Glocker wasn't listening. He orederd a slig to get it and they walked away. |
can i join? he will be a mudokon
name:nilly age:3 likes: his boombat toy dislikes:getting teased, not being fed loin cloth colour:red eye colour:a pale orange |
Rozzy came in.
He saw Mr. Glocker being worried. "What's the matter with you?" Asked Rozzy. |
is it too late for me 2 join?
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no it's not anyway
a scrub called kyle has escaped from glocker fuels said mr glocker we have to find him |
Someway, he didn't know how. But he had found a way out of the factory.
"Now... I might just need some outside help. But will they believe me?" Kyle said to himself, "and will i get there in time? Gah, i'm just gonne steal some vehicles." He whent inside the hangar-thingy(call it what you want.), and viewed the room a bit. The guard was sleeping on his duty. "Now that's what i call luck..." he said, sneaked to the guard, and slowly took the vehicle-key from him. He then sneaked to one of the vehicles, and startyed it. The guard slowly woke up. "Hey! Freeze!" He yelled, and shot after Kyle. But kyle had already got out from there. The guard quickly ran over to the broadcast-microphone and yelled: "Attention! Kyle the scrub has gotten out of here. He stole a vehicle. All sligs get out and find him!" Then he took one of the vehicles himself, and got out. |
"Ahhh, nothing like a good bath. What's wrong with you?" Jeremy asked. His assistent slig gave him a cigar. "Meh, anyway Status report on the muds Leny?"
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