Raws
 

I'm wrighting a new story called, Raws.

My name is raws, and I live in a sea called Turto.
I am a sea-rex, who is very annoyed.
When I was little, I was ahppily playing around with my friends.
But then the Turto treatment plant came.
Every day the sligs come out, on a boat, dumping the waste in the Turto sea.
Then I got really angry.
They came out once, and they went to far and dumped toxic waste in the water.
The most went to my Brother's cave, and the next day he was dead.
Because of that event, I have been hunting down these ships since, and am trying to kill the sligs.
I've called my Rebellion Sewage disrupters.
Most fish think my idea is stupid, exept for my friends:
Gnashers
Chop
T.J (Terrifying Jaws)
Chomp.
We are timing the system on how often they come and where abouts they dump the waste.
There are points we have named:
Shipwreck rock
Sea-rex cove
and more.

I hope you like my new story.

That was a nice beginning, BBS. I can't wait to see more. :)

The boat came out.
"Boat at Shipwreck rock!" Raws shouted.
Suddenly, T.J swam up to the ship, and took a chunk out of it.
The ship jolted, and it leaned backwards.
A slig fell out, leaving him being electrocuted by his pants.
Chomp went up to the slig, and wacked him with his tail.
The plan had went wrong.
The boat sank, with the remaining sligs on the escape boat.
The barrels of sewege and waste tipped into the water, and Raws went to explore it.
He swam up, and tasted it.
This barrel was toxic, he thought.
He roared, and went back to the cave.

Meanwhile, at the shore, the sligs had been watching the boat sink, and encuraging the surviving sligs to hurry up.
Then they saw a huge Sea-rex swimming behind the sligs.
It was gnashers.
Gnashers was the biggest out of the sewage disrupters, and his teeth were as sharp as vykker claws.
Gnashers went from underneath, and he popped the escape-boat.
By now, the sligs on the shore, were crying, and running back and forewards in panick.
Gnashers dived for the kill, and the sligs were gone.

Your story has a awsome begining I want to hear more.! :)

I like your ideas Biggy Bro Slig, keep up the good work. This is the first story I've ever seen with a sea-rex as the main character.

Nice BBS. Having a sea-rex as a main character is a really interesting concept. I can't wait to see more-this story could really lead up to something interesting. ;)

I'm going to have to leave this, I'm going on holiday on monday.

Ok. Have fun while you're away, BBS! :D

Hey I like this Story.I am a large fan of Spielbergs work, and I enjoy things that are based on his films (As long as they are not cheesy rip-offs)

Suddenly Gnashers jolted forward, as a huge chunk of sand broke off the side.
Then he went under.
He popped up again, to eat two little screaming figures.
The sea-rex jumped for the other group.
He ate them aswell.
Then he headed for home.
Until he saw the sewage boat.
He swam for it.
IMPACT!
Gnashers smashed into the back of the boat, and the sligs jerked forward into the sea.
Chomp grabbed the sligs leg, and decided on drowning him.
Then Gnashers came andd ate the others.
He swam back to the sinking chunk of sand.
BANG!
Gnashers blew up into a million pieces of flesh, and four sligs, two vykkers, a fat mud, and a robotic steef flew out, in the direction of rupture farms.

If you didn't notice, I tied it up with The guru's revenge.

Cool, i liked it! write more!

Welcome back, BBS! Anyway, nice chapter! That sort of reminded me of Moby Dick with the thrashing and pounding into everything. ;) And you sure love to put sumo-like muds in your stories, don't you? :D Great job-I can't wait to see the next chapter.

I noticed , good story keep it up.

Great story, I can't wait to see where this is going.

Them sligs watched in aw as the creature blew up.
It made them happy...for not long.
Five ammunition boats had gone into the water, and all four went for the kill.
The first boat had a missile launcher, and it was automatic.
The 2nd had a cannon.
The third had a Machine Gun fitted in.
The fourth and Fith had Rifles.
Four went in, and then Chop popped up.
The slig on duty with the rifle started aiming.
Suddenly, he jumped over the boat, grabbed the driver by his head, and got the slig stuck between his teeth.
Three and Five were shooting at Raws, T.J and Chomp.
Raws went into super charge, and smashed Five to shards of Wood.
Three started to shoot at T.J.
Chomp came up from the back, and bumped the boat a little, Shooter pushed forward, and the gun crushed his winpipe.
The driver had been jerked foward and landed in T.J's mouth.
Two and one charged in, one sending missiles and Torpedoes, and and Two shooting cannon balls.
Raws was in the middle, and the two boats were heading towards him from both sides.
At the right time, he went underwater, and the boats crashed into eachother, and smashing them to splinters.

Nice! Write more! Its getting really good!

Great chapter, BBS. :) This story is packed with action-just what I like!! Keep it up because it's great!

I love this story, keep up the good work.

Yeah I know, I changed it.

Suddenly, T.J popped right up, and a huge boat smashed into his mouth, ripping his mouth in two.
There was a huge roar, and T.J sank to the bottom.
Then, the boat wizzed around, and it went right for raws.
Roars looked at it.
There was Glukkon in it, with ten sligs, nine of them armed with a gun, and the tenth was driving.
The glukkkon barked something at the fith, 6th and 1st sligs.
All three ran to the front of the boat, and fired at Raws.
Raws dived under, and came up just at the right time and smashed into the drivers room.
The driver screamed, and ripped over and fell out of his pants.
He wriggled, and and shouted a lot of words.
Three sligs rushed in, and started poking Raws with the handles of their guns.
Raws stretched himself, and ate 1 slig, and the Slig with no Pants.

Awsome! this is cool!

Nice work, BBS! This story gets better and better as you write it! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Chomp was to busy dodging grenades to help Raws.
A grenade came buzzing his way.
Chomp wacked his tail at the grenade, it buzzed back to the land, and it landed on the Turto Treatment plant.
KABOOM!
It went up in flames, and sending debris flying everywhere.

Raws was having his own problem.
The sligs were dragging him on deck.
He slashed, and he roared, and nothing worked.
Until Chop came.
Chop smashed up next to Raws and chopped the Sligs to peices.
They both went back underwater, to meet Chomp.
Chomp was celebrating of his triumph over the plant.
Chop roared something to Chomp, and the remaining 3 Sea-rex went for the boat.
We went under water, and popped up and bit a huge chunk out of the boat.
Suddenly a slig fell slipped won, and raws ripped him apart.
There were only 2 Sligs and a glukkon on deck now.
Chomp swam up into the driver's room, and snapped the wheel.
Before chomp went away, he switched a small button on.
Suddenly, the boat went rushing away.
Raws swam infront of the boat, and it went over his body like a ramp.
The boat went flying, and changing course, and sending it in the direction of Shipwreck rock.
The glukkon cried, as the boat came closer to the rock.
The boat smashed into the rock, sending an explosion around the rock, sending a glukkon head flying out.
The three went under to sea-rex cove to celebrate their victory.

I know this story is short, but there's one more chapter!

I want to hear the last chapter! its good!

Nice chapter, BBS! I bet the last chapter is going to be the one with the biggest action! :D I can't wait to read it!

We went into Sea-rex cove.
To Raws suprise, the hole of the cove was being attacked by Sligs in little pods.
Chop charged for the nearest one, smashed a hole in the sphere, and bit the slig's arm off.
Chomp went for the one about to attack his dad, and cracked it in two, electricuting the slig inside.
Raws charged towards the biggest pod, and rammed it into the rocky wall.
Suddenly, an explosion went off, cracking the wall into 4.
There were 5 left now.
Suddenly, slig pod no.1 went darting towards Raws.
There was a huge roar from a sea-rex with no bottom jaw, and swam infront of Raws.
T.J! , Raws thought.
The pod swerved away from T.J, and smashed into a wall.
T.J flew backwards, and smashed 2 and 3 into the wall, exploding T.J aswell as the pods.
4 & 5 went ramming into Chop, and Chop screeched with pain.
He stared the sligs, and transformed into a creature so powerful, it could destroy half of mudos.
"So this is what happens when you drop radioactive waste on Sea-rexes." One of the sligs said, as chop rammed into the two.
They exploded, and Chop turned back into his normal self.
The two swam towards him.
"We did it!" Chomp Roared.
"Yeah, we did it!" Raws said.

Wow! That was cool! nice chapter BBS, I couldn't of made a better one myself.

Aww, poor T.J. exploding and all...:( But it was a great chapter, BBS. It sounds like things might settle down a bit now...or will they? :D