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Oddude_ 12-26-2004 08:29 AM

2 flash animations
 
My friend is working with flash, and I tought yo show his 2 animations:

Stickman vs. Smily
Killing a little boy

Comments and questions, right here.

P.S: @ the 'stickman vs. smily' animation, you'll see at the end: "by DEMON".
Well, DEMON is my friend's nickname.

Oddish 12-26-2004 01:35 PM

Erm, well that wasn't great, Ive seen better, and I could make better, also it hard to read the writing. The Sickmen were better than the Boy.

Disgruntled Intern 12-26-2004 06:16 PM

You and your friend are either inredibly young or inredibly stupid.

Well, I'm actually leaning towards a combination of the two, but still.

By the way, the animations are horrid. I've pissed more amusing designs in the snow.

TheRaisin 12-27-2004 12:34 AM

Bloody, stupid, horribly put together, God-awful animation, and no sense of punctuation.

Thanks for sharing.

Facsimile 12-27-2004 12:42 AM

My first Flash was better than those two put together, and it was pretty poor.
Which is why I'm remastering it!

Biggy Bro Slig 12-27-2004 12:53 AM

I must say, it's probably not your best, and the wrighting I could not read, but I would rate it 3/5.

SeaRex 12-27-2004 09:30 AM

Well, offering some constructive criticism here, I suggest you learn to use motion and shape tweens more effectively.

Flash takes time. Not just to learn, but to produce a solid animation. Practice some more with tweens and symbols and then get back to us.

Disgruntled Intern 12-27-2004 08:10 PM

Stop being so nice all of the time.

Pansy!

Abeguy 12-30-2004 01:17 PM

BLAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
funny

odd chick 12-30-2004 04:50 PM

I thought that the Stickman vs. the Smily was really funny! :D But some problems were that I couldn't read the writing and I didn't really like the Boy Killed too much. They could have definitely been better, but overall I liked the first one better than the second one, so it's cool. :)

Al the Glukkon 12-30-2004 04:55 PM

I am sorry but I have to agree with about everyone. How about some backgrounds?

Fuzzle Guy 12-31-2004 05:14 AM

Sould this be in the in NOA&L

TheRaisin 12-31-2004 11:24 AM

It's neither art nor literature.

SeaRex 12-31-2004 12:21 PM

Hey, here's an idea: How about you all shut the f*ck up? Hmm?

I am moving this to NOA&L. SeaRex can deal with it...

Hey... wait...

Mudokon Princess 01-11-2005 10:50 PM

what the...??? lol