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dripik 09-18-2003 03:42 PM

Work at Rupture Farms (v.2.)
 
Hobo asked me to create the second part of the RPG, so here it is. The rules are just like in the first part: no original characters, like Molluck etc. Do not use other RPGers' characters.

if character says something: Character: "..."
if character does something: *Character ...*
if character thinks something: Character's Thoughts: "..."

That's all. I'll post the backstory later, so you must not read the whole story (23 pages). Still have a good time at Rupture Farms! JOIN!

EDIT: And for the new members, we have a thread in Fan Corner where we posted our artwork about this RPG: Rpg cc Fan Art (by tybie_odd). Go and see.

Hobo 09-18-2003 03:49 PM

If you want to find something out from the old thread it can be found here:

http://www.oddworldforums.net/forums...&threadid=6561

I warn you it's long......:D

oddguy 09-19-2003 12:54 AM

I was never a part of zee old thread, so I thought I would join this one!:D

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Name: Knugg

Species: Slig

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Position: Knugg is boss of the new Rupture Farms branch factory. The purpose is to establish a new market of foreign food beyond mudos and to send it to the hub Rupture Farms for Packaging and Distrabution. Knugg is looking for a good site for the factory and it's expected to be up and running by a month at least.

Story: Knugg was a slig vallet, but decided to branch out on his own and get somewhere in life. His old boss made some calls and Knugg got a job working for Rupture Farms! Knugg's old boss wants 10% of what Knugg makes from the job he found him and Knugg signed the contract.

Personality: Knugg is very greedy and doesn't care who he hurts to get what he wants. He's even trying to find a way to breach the contract his stupid boss signed him to. It seems the only way to get out of it is for the old glukkon to die.

Appearance: Though he isn't a gaurd anymore, he still buys lots of new slig gear and guns! He even has the latest high-tech slig pants!:D He is usually seen with all sorts of gadgets and even has a chant suprssor connected to him on a leesch! He has this fear of being possessed since Abe was at the first Rupture Farms and killed one of his friends. Knugg just yelled HELP and ran away, but he still is fearfull of Abe.

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-oddguy:fuzcool:

Hobo 09-19-2003 06:41 AM

Yeah I'll join too: (OOC: Tell me if anything's wrong with this:))

Name: Bazzaril

Species: Slig

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Position: Bazzaril Is in charge of the security of any guests to Rupture Farms. He takes his job seriously, and you'll never find him with an unloaded, Shotgun.

Story: Bazzaril Has been a slig guard for as long as he can remember. He enjoys his job greatly, and has no problem carrying out any order, except for "retreat"!

Personality: Bazzaril is a tough cookie, he's not going to give in easily to anything so if you start an argument with him, don't expcet it to be short. Bazzaril, is not a very sociable slig and hates the company of others...

Appearance: Bazzaril looks like any other Slig except for the fact that he has a large red Mark across his back in the shapr of a circle, any quips about it being a bullseye usually result in a happy Bazzaril and the person who made the bullseye remark unconcious

Rex Tirano 09-19-2003 01:44 PM

I'll join......I nevr did join the other one.....and when I wanted to..it was too long....It didn't just put newbs off ^_^.....

Name: Orlando

Species: Slig

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Position: Orlando is just your regular security slig. He likes to skive, and can often be found round the back having a nice nap...no wonder he dosn't get promoted....

Story: Orlando's Life has just been Ruptue Farms....He does what he is told (most of the time anyways...) He sneaks off, hates his job, and is irational.....Just like his creator.....

*Rexy : Shut up!!*

Personality: Orlado is a big softie, he'll give in easily to anything He'll do aything he can to help, but that dosn't always mean, he does the right thing. Orlando will do anything......basically.......witin limits of course.....

Appearance: Orlando is your average joe slig. But you'll often see him carrying a stuffed stoat (stoats........yes....) that he called Maud.....

Oh did I mention.....hs ofton called MOB.....Mad Orlando Bloom......

*Rexy: Where did that beautiful name come from? :P*

[Edit: Please tell me if I did somethin wrong*

dripik 09-19-2003 02:03 PM

ooc: the character profiles are perfect! They sound cool!
Where are the old members of the RPG? Come!

Reiji Neko Mitsukai 09-20-2003 03:07 AM

*jumps up and down and waves arms* I'm here! I'm here! I've just been waiting for Seargentbig to reply.

The Red Muse 09-20-2003 01:07 PM

*raises her hand*

I'm here. I'm back and alive... Kinda...
God... The last three days were the longest days in my life...!
*shrudders*

O_o


*coughs*

Anywho, I since the old W@RF was killed(:p), I thought that I'd post my characters profiles here on the new thread, so everyone can read about my three-oh-so-fantasic guys.

[::1st char::]

Name: Red Muse
Species: Slig, worker class
Age:12
Personality: He's lazy, he's nice and he likes poems.
Muse befriends easily and is sometimes a bit hypersensitive, meaning that he'll burst into tears if he sees anyone else cry.
Though he might sound like a wuss, he has an inbreakable sense of justice and a strong will. He hardly never gives up.

Red Muse is somewhat against guns and killing. He has seen something, when he was too young to see it, that shocked him. If you ask him what it was that he saw, he most likely doesn't reply.
He does carry a gun himself, but he has never actually fired it. His "weapon of choice" is and old assault rifle, worn-out and rusted.
Not only is his gun rusted, so are his pants. They're probably the first model that came out, so the pants tend to break up and malfunction time to time. He has glued some propaganda stickers to his pants to cover the most biggest rust blotchs.
His slig mask is also old. One eye-piece, ragged and stained, but he doesn't want to give them up. (If you read from the old thread--you'll get to know that after one horrible accident, RM had to change is mask into the two-eyed version, haha.)

Muse's most precious belongings are his pencils and pens and he always carries some extra paper with him.

[::2nd char::]

Name: Jammer
Species: BigBro Slig, military class
Age: 18
Personality: A BigBro with a bad attitude.
Jammer was a former employee at the Vykkers Labs, until he got fired by an unknown reason.
His vykker employer classified Jammer as schizophrenic , before he was fired. His name is known amongst the vykkers, because only they know what happened to Jammer, that made him become what he is now.

Jammer likes weapons, so he has an amazingly huge arsenal of different guns with him, but he hardly never gets to use them all.
His main weapon is his BlitzPacker, which he is ofter seen polishing.
Like his guns, Jammer's other equipment is also top-notch;
His pants are made of the finest metals and his headgear is a one-of-a-kind item.

But, high status, big guns and fancy gear doesn't make you a genious- Jammer solves all his problems by fighting and smoking.
Jammer likes to brawl and mock others. He's malicious and cruel, but behind that tough shell, withing lies a weak self-esteem.

Jammer is large even for a BB and he has a mudokon skull tattooed on his left shoulder.

[::3rd char::]

Name:Ammy
Species: Mudokon, native
Age: 10
Personality: Mercurial and demanding.
Appearance: Small and fragile looking mudokon girl. Her skin is turquoise and she has a tattoo of a scrab in her forehead.

She was stolen from her village at the outskirts of Scrabania Desert by the Magog Cartel. Ammy and her father(name unknown)med an accidend when trying to flee a group of sligs following them, which cost the life of her father.

Ammy has an unknown relationship with scrabs; she can tame the untamable--though she hasn't realized this herself yet.

Eventhough Ammy is a female mudokon-- she in not fertile.

Dave 09-20-2003 09:10 PM

Whoo! About time for me to join this.

Name: Dave

Species: Mudokon Worker Class

Age: 17

Description: Greenish-white skin (usually). Average height. Red black feathers on head. Hatched in the previous RuptureFarms, and was saved by Abe previously. Re-enslaved when RuptureFarms reopened. Was a quiet and inactive Employee until he witnessed the recent Stockyard shootings.

Skills: Supurb floor scrubber and slog-caretaker (feeder, really).


if that's fine, i'm all set.

The Red Muse 09-21-2003 04:20 AM

So, errrm, when do we continue the RP?

Hobo 09-21-2003 05:34 AM

When all the usuals rejoin/tell us their not rejoining

dripik 09-21-2003 01:16 PM

I think it's a good idea to post the profiles of the old characters here, so new RPGers will know the old chars.


Name: #7 Slig
Species: Slig
Age: 20
Personality: Boss of Rupture Farms Security Dept., good-working employee
Appearance: new and shiny mechanical pants, green-glowing eyes, carries shotgun.


Name: Arnie
Species: Glukkon
Age: 32
Personality: Big Cheese, new boss of Rupture Farms, very quick at job, has his own train in Feeco Depot
Appearance: wears green suit, has a cigar, and a suit-badge with Rupture Farms-logo on it.


Name: Otto
Species: Glukkon
Age: 10
Personality: Arnie's little brother, learning stocks and business in Rupture Farms
Appearance: blue suit, Rupture Farms badge on suit, black shoes.


Name: Rick
Species: Mudokon
Age: 20
Personality: nice, good employee, but in some cases he might be a rebel Mudokon
Appearance: a long, red wound on his arm (Rick: "Stupid Scrab!" )


That's all. These are my permanent characters, there were some characters who were just in the RPG for a short time.

tybie_odd 09-21-2003 10:38 PM

ooc: I'm gonna have to quit due to my college demands. I don't have enough free time to reply in a timely manner anymore, so I think it's best if I don't slow things up. I'm gonna miss you guys!

As for Smudge, Jayne, Vince, Correl, and Adrian... you guys decide. Someone else can take them up, or you could just drop them, whatever you want.

I wish you all the very best of fortune and the very funnest times! I'll miss you all terribly.

~ tybie_odd

Reiji Neko Mitsukai 09-22-2003 12:00 AM

Yeah, that does sound like a good idea. Well, here's mine.

Name: Xene (Pronounced 'Zene')
Species: Paramite
Sex: Female
Identifying Marks: Scar that runns down her back, another down her right front leg.
Personality: Cold and hardened. She doesn't like to talk about how she got that way or how she got her scars. She is fully capable of taking care of herself, but shows little hope for the future.
Biography: Born and raised in the wilderness. Grew up, then captured and sent to the new Rupture Farms to be slaughtered.
Friends: None.
Weapons: What nature gave her.

Name: Mina
Species: Paramite
Age: Compared to a human, she would be about four years old (young child)
Sex: Female
Personality: Usually a fairly sweet and quiet child, even more quiet now.
Biography: Born in captivity, Mina was shipped with her parents to the New Rupture Farms. Her father was shot and instantly killed in the recent shootings in the Stockyards. Her mother was then wounded, who told her daughter to "follow the two paramites and the tall... thing." She then charged a slig, getting killed in front of her daughter. Mina then followed the trio closely, managing to keep herself hidden in the herd of paramites.

You're leaving us tybie? :crying: We'll miss you!

The Red Muse 09-22-2003 04:16 AM

:

Originally posted by tybie_odd
ooc: I'm gonna have to quit due to my college demands. I don't have enough free time to reply in a timely manner anymore, so I think it's best if I don't slow things up. I'm gonna miss you guys!

As for Smudge, Jayne, Vince, Correl, and Adrian... you guys decide. Someone else can take them up, or you could just drop them, whatever you want.

I wish you all the very best of fortune and the very funnest times! I'll miss you all terribly.

~ tybie_odd



I understand...

I wish you good luck with your college studies! It's a real shame you couldn't continue RP with us....

We will miss you!

:crying:

oddguy 09-22-2003 05:09 AM

I can't wait to start!:D When do you guys think this thread will get going?:fuzconf:

-oddguy:fuzcool:

dripik 09-22-2003 12:43 PM

ooc: be patient, oddguy. We'll wait a little, if everyone joined who wanted, then we will start.

We'll miss you, tybie_odd. Good luck at studies!

oddguy 09-22-2003 02:24 PM

Okay...I guess I can wait a little while longer. In the meantime, there are some other well done RPG's I'm off to. Se ya!:D

-oddguy:fuzcool:

Hobo 09-25-2003 01:14 PM

Who else've we got to wait for?
Sergant Big, who else?

Dave 09-25-2003 07:20 PM

And now, with personal permission from Dripik, I will create three Glukkons for W@RF.

Name: Vladimir
Age: 57
Species: Glukkon Wanna-be
Gender: Male
Story: Was a Junior Executive at Flub Fuels until Abe shut them down. After many years of living in ridicule for "donating" all his funds to Lulu, he finally managed to start as a succesful part-owner of the New Fee Co Station. He is a partial owner of RuptureFarms, along with Arnie, Otto, and

Name: Amaral
Age: 36
Species: Glukkon Big Cheese
Gender: Male
Story: Formerly Lulu's boss. Fired him for excessive laziness. Now the sole owner of Tastee Treets Bakery in western Mudos, and a partial owner of RuptureFarms.

Name: Skaff
Age: 66
Species: Glukkon Big Cheese
Gender: Male
Story: Retired Executive-in-Chief of Magog Motors. (Abe and Munch missed him during their raids of Glukkon facilities--he was on a vacation). Owns nearly all stock in Lungbuster Cigars, and is a very heavy smoker. Now partial owner of RuptureFarms.

Alrighty then. These guys own RuptureFarms along with Arnie, Otto, and Halije (though I am not yet sure that Halije is an owner). They are like the Chairmen that Molluck talked to at the beginning of AO. Get it?

that's all.

dripik 09-26-2003 03:50 PM

ooc: OK, three new Glukkons at Rupture Farms. Arnie is the owner of Rupture Farms, Otto is an apprentice, and Halije is an executive, just like Vladimir, Amaral and Skaff. How's that? I mean, are they executives at RF?

Dave 09-26-2003 05:13 PM

OOC: yeah that works i was thinking that they would be like the chairmen at the board meeting at AO's start ... so yeah that's about the same

anywho how much longer do we need to wait before starting? are we even sure that everyone who was in before are gonna be in it now?

ABEZILLA 09-28-2003 07:51 AM

HELLO CAN I JOIN THIS RPG THE OLD ONE WAS WICKED AND I THINK I SHOULD JOIN THIS ONE SO PLESE MAY I JOIN????????

right heres my charcters
name: abezilla(dont even ask why hes called that)
species:mudokon
age:very old
gender:male
story:he was a mud who was free so he chased intruders with sticks until he was captued and brought here to be a slave(MUHAHAHAHAHA)well at least thats what he thinks will happen to him and his best freind andy who was a worker slig until the glucks had no use for him so with a nice big kick by the evil big bros he was sent flying into abezillas tribe and he was from that day on called the flying wonder!!!
name:andy/the flying wonder(just call him thw for short)
age:well he says he is 14 but he looks about 10
gender:male
story (well i think i put it in abezillas story)
job:security slig

The Red Muse 09-28-2003 03:33 PM

[::veteran::]
 
As a result of serious thinking (yes, I am capable of that! :p), I decided to drop Ammy off my char. list.

She has so small role compared to my other two boys, so I thought I'd leave her.

So, from now on my chars will include Red Muse and Jammer.

This is The Red Muse, signing off, good night people!

Seargentbig 09-29-2003 12:52 PM

Don't worry! I didn't abandon you to the slogs!
The internet has had some problems lately, but I think it is over now
A question before I post my characters again: Are we continuing right from where we left off, or is some time gonna pass beforehand?

dripik 09-29-2003 03:45 PM

ooc: Well, I think we should start from the next day after the Stockyards-problem. How about that?

Reiji Neko Mitsukai 09-29-2003 06:55 PM

Yay! :fuzgrin: Searge is back!

I guess it doesn't really matter to me if we start at the next day. As long as we get started soon.

Seargentbig 09-29-2003 11:24 PM

Ah, but if it's the next day, what would my two wildlife characteres do? Would they even still be there?
Oh, well. I'm putting up Halije for now.

Name: Halije

Species: Glukkon (Pud, I guess...)

Apperance: Young Glukkon, wears Redish clothes most of the time.

Personality: Though only a Pud, this Glukkon shows a lot of promise. Typical glukkon.

Good ol' copy an' paste!
:fuzsmile:

Reiji Neko Mitsukai 09-30-2003 12:17 AM

Hmmm. Maybe they could be resting, since that's what Exalmex wanted to do in the first place?

Seargentbig 09-30-2003 05:55 AM

No, what I mean is that they have left the free-fire zone and that is the border of rupturefarms.

dripik 09-30-2003 02:38 PM

ooc: Good! Everyone is here. Shall we start? I have an idea. We finish the last RPG's day (after the free fire zone-accident). Next morning, the new RPGers join with their characters.

Hobo 09-30-2003 02:40 PM

Ok then, sound good with me, off you go..........

dripik 10-03-2003 01:52 PM

ooc: OK, let's start...



Arnie: "Is everyone here?"

Otto: "#7 Slig and Smudge are still out there. We should call them back."

Arnie: "#7 SLIG! SMUDGE! COME BACK! EVERYONE IS HERE!"

oddguy 10-03-2003 06:38 PM

:

Originally posted by oddguy
I was never a part of zee old thread, so I thought I would join this one!:D

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Name: Knugg

Species: Slig

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Position: Knugg is boss of the new Rupture Farms branch factory. The purpose is to establish a new market of foreign food beyond mudos and to send it to the hub Rupture Farms for Packaging and Distrabution. Knugg is looking for a good site for the factory and it's expected to be up and running by a month at least.

Story: Knugg was a slig vallet, but decided to branch out on his own and get somewhere in life. His old boss made some calls and Knugg got a job working for Rupture Farms! Knugg's old boss wants 10% of what Knugg makes from the job he found him and Knugg signed the contract.

Personality: Knugg is very greedy and doesn't care who he hurts to get what he wants. He's even trying to find a way to breach the contract his stupid boss signed him to. It seems the only way to get out of it is for the old glukkon to die.

Appearance: Though he isn't a gaurd anymore, he still buys lots of new slig gear and guns! He even has the latest high-tech slig pants!:D He is usually seen with all sorts of gadgets and even has a chant suprssor connected to him on a leesch! He has this fear of being possessed since Abe was at the first Rupture Farms and killed one of his friends. Knugg just yelled HELP and ran away, but he still is fearfull of Abe.

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-oddguy:fuzcool:

Knugg stepped out of the chopper and onto the new soil. No one had ever been to this part of Oddworld before. It had taken a lot of legal mumbo-jumbo to get there too! Apparently this island was said to be filled with monsterous beasts, which was good for the new Rupture Farms Branch Factory of Fine Foreign Foods, but all this was mere myth since nobody had been on the island for ages and ages. This project had to deliver, because many investers had to throw in a lot more moolah than expected for the new factory.......mainly because it was on the other side of OW and nothing but water surrounded the isle of Gruba for nearly 1000 miles, so an airport had to be built and all that expensive blah blah.

Knugg walked forward and was met by another slig driving an off-road vehicle of some sort.

Slig: Ah, you must be Knugg. Hop in the car, I'l drive you to the factory.

Knugg: *to Slig* Don't mind if I do. So, your name is....

Slig:....Bob, but you can call me Clika!

Knugg: Okay....Clika, how close is the factory to gettting finished?

Clika: It's basically done, except for a few minor finishing touches.

Knugg: What's that?

Clika: Ummm, we don't have any stockyards yet.

Knugg was furious.

Knugg: What?! Tell me you have captured some sort of wildlife for chopin' into some kind of food!

Clika: Well, that's the problem. We haven't see any animals.

Knugg: Okay, I heard you were the best hunter for my project. I've given you 6 months on this island and you haven't caught a thing!

Clika was sweating a lot and breathing hard like a big baby. He then abrubtly changed the subject.

Clika: Hey look! We've arrived at the factory! Idn't it real nice?

It was a magnificent factory. Much bigger than Rupture Farms and Soulstorm Brew put together, and it had all new top of the line stuff. Very high tech. All the workers walking outside looked like ants compared to this place. Knugg was impressed, but still pissed.

Kungg: With no critters to chop up, this factory is useless!

Clika: I'll find em' real soon. I mean, everybody here has heard something real big howling out there. We'll get em' soon.

Knugg: I'll get em' soon.

Clika: Wha...wha...whaddya mean?

Knugg pulled out his shotgun and blew Clika's head off.

-oddguy:fuzcool:

Dave 10-04-2003 01:19 AM

Meanwhile, Amaral was relaxing in his office atop the Tastee Treets Bakery (ooc: a made up place, don;t look for it :)) when his slig valet burst into the room.

Ed: Boss! I just got a fone call! Your spy sent word that there have been shootings at RuptureFarms!

Amaral: Eh? Shootings? Oh, Odd. If Arnie can't run the place properly, I suppose I'll have to step in.

Ed: What do you mean?

Amaral: Get me the fone. I have some calls to make.

Amaral called in some favors, and sent word to Arnie that he would pay big moolah for two associates of his to help manage RupptureFamrs. He then called the two old business partners, Vladimir and Skaff. The two agreed to help out--a new RuptureFarms would a a nice side project.

Amaral: Alright. Now we just need to wait for Arnie's answer.

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Arnie: "#7 SLIG! SMUDGE! COME BACK! EVERYONE IS HERE!"

As Arnie shouted, a Mudokon stumbled from the wreckage, almost silently. He coughed, and fell to his knees near the group of workers at RuptureFarms.


(ooc: that works, right? i hate being new :fuzemb: )

oddguy 10-04-2003 04:12 AM

It was night. A pitch black night in Gruba. Of course, Knugg could see with his night vision mask. He was hiding in a thick bush with some heavy duty snuzi aimed right for a.............well, he didn't know what it was called, but this thing was huge. A double-headed monster with six arms. It stood tall, but was facing the ground and sniffing something at the moment. Knugg didn't want to screw this up, so he aimed carefully and then pulled the trigger. Pop! Woosh! Hit! The beast screamed loudly into the air, its back arched and howling at the stars. Another shot and the creature fell to the ground with a deep thud that shook the ground.

Knugg: *thinking* Hehehehehe!:devil:

Knugg ran on over to the....thing and put a tracer on it and pulled out his radio.

Knugg: *into radio* Alright, I got another two-headed guy. Tell the team to retrive.

Knugg was in a better mood. He felt like he was on vacation with the fun hunting and all. He'd allready bagged six of the huge beasts. He'd even managed to get a couple females, so now the lab was allready making monster babies. Things were going a lot better and on schedual. Knugg was so happy, he lit himself up a cigerette. As he was smoking, he didn't notice something watching him.

The next day Knugg visited the stockyards. It looked like a zoo. All sorts of different animal varieties just locked up to breed. The breeding process was going quicker than expected. Eggs had allready been layed by some.

Knugg: The investers are going to pee their pants when they hear about this!:D

-oddguy:fuzcool:

dripik 10-04-2003 04:57 AM

ooc: Dave, everything is OK, except you controlled other people's characters. That's not allowed. You should edit that. You controll your characters and wait to see what others' reactions are. That's how it looks.

Dave 10-04-2003 10:09 AM

ooc: oops ... hee hee ...
okay i fixed it up ... sorry

Seargentbig 10-04-2003 11:29 AM

(Ooc: Great, now I feel right replying)

Halije: *Walks up to Arnie*
"Are they all gone? All the paramites?"
*Sees (Unknown Mudokon)*
"Hey! Who are you!"

(Ooc: If someone elce wanted their characters to notice Dave (The character) first, you should reply sooner.)

Hobo 10-04-2003 02:42 PM

(OOC: I'm confused, as usual, is Knugg at the Rupture farms the rest of us are at or is the factory he's at got at a completly different place)