Yay!
Draw it flying before a sunset sky. Don't show a horizon; just colour the background to be a sunset sky. And have some pink, fluffy clouds or something. Also, give the lolly wings, too, so it's not just floating there. Teeny, tiny butterfly wings. There might be a reason why Meech tries to keep me from making suggestions. |
give it claws :D
whoops sorry didn't see the reply on the next page xD |
Let's hope MM *will* see it
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Add some skeleton arms.
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Write the rules across its face!
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I like what you did there.
Well, while I have the chance (ok, it's probably bad etiquette to have two goes in a row but it makes up for all the times I've missed)... Move the lolly left and the creature right so they no longer overlap. Move the lolly a little lower than the creature, too. Please. <3 |
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Man, now I have about three small changes I want to suggest...
I guess I'd better let someone else have a go first. EDIT: Out of interest, are you still planning on doing hand-drawn versions of the finished creations? |
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I like how you edited in your compliment and "please". |
And I like you, you lovely man.
Please. |
There's a thin line between kind and just plain creepy.
Well, in the real world there is, not on the Oddworld Forums. |
Look at the very first round. I'd say there is no line for creepy on the OWF. You come here at your own risk.
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That's what I was saying.
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Oh. I miss interpreted that last part.
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Give it a thin creepy grin under the eye, stretching from one side of it to the other. And have two tiny nostrils above it beneath the eye.
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Color the spiral lollipop and wings on it a fittingly candy-like color.
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Draw flames around the lolly pop.
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Have the mouth just slightly open showing horrible teeth, please.
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We're running out of space down there.
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In that case, colour it. The triangle bit should be skin coloured, but all rotting, and the machinery at the bottom should look metallic. Leave the arms as they are and colour the horns brown/grey. Please.
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I'm still doing it. And I can't stop anyone else for asking for more. I'm just saying it's probably a bad idea.
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Oh, well just have it open a little tiny bit.
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Meech?
:fuzblink: I was gonna say 'poke', but that went down so well last time. |