Hey :D Time for me to join :) I've just read the hole thing, and i'm gonna start reading the first part... That's gonna take some time...

Okay..

Name: Kix
Race: Mudokon
Gender: Female(Anyone got an idea of how a female mudokon looks like?)
Age: 19(in human years)
Appearence: Her skin is normal green, her ponytail is red an violet and has tatoos on her legs. She may be thinner than other female muds. The fullmoon has a weird effect on her that transforms the skins green color to a golden color.
Personality: Cares about her friends, but she doesn't like strangers. She likes to explore the world, and since she got in Rupture farms, she had found all kind of old passages.

ooc: hmm... anything wrong?

(OOC: Hey T-Nex! Welcome to RuptureFarms! About time! Have fun!)

(occ: hey... hello T-nex, welcome to the rpg... if you don't see a female go to http://www.oddworldforums.net/showthread.php?t=9806... and begin your character's odd journey!)

(ooc: Yes i know, i've seen vanillakillah's good art.. But no one has seen a female mudokons... But i think i'll use vanillah's example...)
EDIT: (ooc: Thanx Havoc ;))

(occ: cuz, there are no female muds... just a mudokon queen, named Sam... the females are the fans own idea... but start your characters journey please... or sg...)

Mac wanderd around the factory, passing the cafeteria which happand to be completely empty. Then saw a hallway stuffed with three sligs and two glukkons.

Mac: Hello, can I ask who's in charge here?

(occ:wait... uhh... there are 3 glukkons and 5 sligs...)

Peter: I wanna buy this facility! But Arnie is talking to those sligs!

Slig Valet Only Known As #8: Hiya... that giant slig near that bigbro looks scary...

Dave: Man... that Arnie doesn't heard me...

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In a native land, far, far away, the FMF and the other muds are planning to attack the Rupture Farms...

(ooc: ok, i must get starting then)

Kix walks silently across the corridor, as she sees a barrel.'
Kix: "Uh looks dirty."
*Cleans the barrel*
Kix: "That was the work for today. I think i'm going to sleep now"
*Walks to the restroom*

(OOC: Will, you realy need to start to be a bit more clear... please! You never mentioned them actualy going inside. So how am i supposed to know Peter and the slig follow Mac inside? I thought they just stood there outside the gate :P. But please try to explain a little more and be a tad more clearer will you?)

(occ: How you supposed to know? I don't know, too... everyone is changing the scene... ok I'm promise I be clear... They are inside... Mac too... or sg... now I'm confused...)

(ooc: Why do you keep saying "Or sg"??? what does sg mean?)

(OOC: Ok, just to have everything clear: Mac, Arnie, Peter, valet slig, Otto, steve and Bella are in the hallway... Jayne, RM and Jammer in the RR, and the muds for freedom (or whatever) are somewhere outside RF (??)... got it right???)

(occ: sg=something... I forget the word so i wrote "...or sg")

(ooc: lol... Shouldn't we get the story going on?)

(Occ: c'mon... create a new part to the story... like the others... see my first posts in this thread...)

(ooc: well, kix is sleeping... We wouldn't wake her, now would we :p)

*Peter, #8, Bela, Steve and Dave waiting for Arnie...*

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*The mudokons going to attack the factory with meetle ballons...*

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*Dave in the stockyard, after he waiting alot for Arnie...*

Dave: Man... that Arnie is a busy gluk... ha?

*Dave looks at the sky...*

Dave: I can't see... yeah... it's a... aaa... Meetle!?

Kix: *Wakes up from a terrible dream* Aaargh i hate nightmares.
She goes out to the hallway, as she sees a bunch of gluks and sligs.
Kix: "Woow... What happened here? hhmmm, maybe i'd just get back to work."
*stomach growls*
Kix: "Or maybe i should have a little bite first, i'm so hungry" *Heads to the cafeteria*
Kix: "HELLO! What is the special meal for today?"

Dave: Uhhh... one... two... uhhh... seven... and... at least one hundred... ok... yeah...

*Dave runs into Halije's office... Halije is sleeping*

Dave (to a microphone) : Hey... Warning! Uhhh... seven meetle ballons and at least one hundred native muds are going to attack the facility... I repeat: seven meetle ballons and at lest one hundred natives...

*Dave runs for his vendo bomber...*

(OOC: Hey, T! Welcome aboard!)

Bart hears the warning.
Bart: Oh, jeez! Raid, go find yourself some kind of power-ups! A blitzpacker, some steroids, anything! Keep me safe!
Raid: I'm on it, boss!

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Logan hears the announcment.
Logan: Ahh, shoot. I'd better get things started.

*The meetle ballons are attacking the factory with mudarchers...*

*Bela see the FMF comin'*

Bob: Hmm... Bela and Steve... we don't hurt you... now.But we must shut down the facility. Attack my brethen!!!

*And all muds attacked the Rupture Farms... This the end of the re-opened RF? It's not... there are great people who defend it!* (occ: C'mon join the battle!)

(ooc: I don't think that this is the right time for a battle... oh well...)

Kix grabs a plate of scrableg and begins to eat.
Kix: "Uh this is great."
***New char***
Name: Bud
Race: Mudokon
Gender: Male
Age: 17(yes, in human years)
Appearance: Has a green skin, but some red spots around the body. He has five feathers, and tattoos all around the body. Was sent to rupture farms for not long ago.
Personality: Fears sligs more than everything, becous of a terible past. Always tries to escape no mater what it takes, but it never worked for him. Doesn't really have any friends, and likes to stick to the darkness.

***Kix***

Kix is done with the meal.

Kix: "mmmm! *Takes the plate to the kitchen, but suddently feels very sick* "Yuk! My
stomach hurts" *Starts to see green spots before her eyes* "Ouh... WHY me?" *stumbles like she was a drunk mudokon* "I... Must... Not ...." *faints*

***Bud***
Bud: "uh... what am i doing here?"

(occ: the battle only in one side of the factory...)

(OOC: That the entire point of an Attack T-nex! They are supposed to come when its not the right time for the enemy :P)

*Nick hears the warning*

Nick: So you guys WHERE serieus! Why didnt you say so! Damn you guys!!

Nick heads of to the security post where Halije is fast asleep (OOC: Though I never rememberd he had fallen asleep... ah well.)

Nick: Halije wake up! The plant is being attacked!

While he tries to wake Halije he starts scanning the button keybord for an emercancy button. Then he saw a huge red button in the middle of the bord sayiing: Emercency Button.

Nick pushed it.

Nick: Wake up damn you, or il feed you to the slogs!

On the screen multiple message's apeard and outside an loud alarm sounded and red lights started blinking. On the monitor it said:

Closing Main Gate's ---- Complete
Closing Stockyard Gate's ---- ERROR
Closing Executive's Armord Room ---- Waiting for approval
Activate Stockyard motion sensors ---- ERROR
Activate remaining motion sensors ---- Complete
Arm Mine's ---- Complete
Send Request for Elite Commando backup to Slig Barracks ---- Sending...

Nick notices the two Error message's and then sees the stockyard itself being invaded at the verry back by hundreds of muds.

Nick: Halije WAKE UP!!!

Has a quike thought, then make's a run for the stockyard.
Nick: Is nothing in this place working propperly!!

Bart hustled to follow Raid, who had (luckily) stumbled into the Armory. He was busy outfitting himself in a flying harness. Two miscellaneous mudokons were busy trying to finagle a few blitzpackers underneath the harness.
Bart: Holy crap! Raid, how are you going to fly that?
Raid: Don't panic, boss. With me packing this much heat, I doubt that anything will stop me.

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In the small back room behind the kitchen, the small crate that Logan kept all of his belongings in was tossed aside, revealing a small hole in the wall.
Logan was inside, making his way towards his secret stash.

(ovv: yeah... Halije sleepin' in the executive rest room... sorry...)

*Dave activated his bomber's rotors...*

Dave: Wahoo! It's time for some rock!

*Dave placed a cd to the cd player...*

Dave: Yeah!!! Sliggin' Park!!! (occ: uhh... nevermind...)

*Dave flies near a meetle ballon...*

Dave: Gotcha!

*Dave releases a vendo bomb... the ballon explodes...*

Dave: Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kix woke up again.

Kix: "Aaaawww my head..... What happened?"
*Hears the alarms*

Kix: "HOLY POOP! I must get safe, no way i'm gonna be a part of this"
*runs deeper in the old part of rupture farms*
At the way, the hole thing got creepier and creepier.

Kix's Thought: "Wow.... All that blood." *slows down*
*looks around*
Kix: "Hmmm... never been here before..."

***Bud***
*panics*
Bud: "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR"
*running from the end of a corridor to the other*

Dave: Now, an other one!

*An other ballon explodes...*

Dave: It's too easy...

*Suddenly a SpooceRay (or sg...) from a SpooceBow hits Dave's vendo bomber...*

Dave: I'm hit! I going down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(OOC: Will, I think the two of us better keep quiet, at least untill most of the others get a chance to reply to all this. I understand you want to get into action, but you will have to be a little patient.)

Nick runs outside to the stockyards passing trough the jammed gate.

Nick mumbling: Electronics box... where is that thing?

*Looks around when suddenly something crashes just a few feet away from him.*

Nick: What the?! Dave is that you?!

(occ: Ok, Havoc... now I going to watch the TV... and I go to vacation on Wednesday...)

((ooc:...jesus! All of this in such a short time? I'm totally lost now...)

Bart: "Uhh, Raid? You sho' 'bout dat?"
Raid: "Oh, please. If I do a good deed, it'll prove to Arnie that hiring you will be worthwhile. See?"
Bart thought.
Bart: "No. I don't see. But, whatever. If you get killed, don't be offended if I sell your stuff."
Raid: *snorting* "Sure, boss."

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Logan came out the far end of his tunnel, emerging in a section at the old, wrecked end of Rupture Farms. He was in a room with a defunct meat grinder attached to a low ceiling. The ceiling had a little grip-edge that Logan could grab onto and climb up on top of. At the top of that ceiling, there was a lever that had snapped in half. Scorch marks were scarred into the metal around it.
But there was something more important here: Spoocebows and Tomahawks, not to mention several sets of mudokon armor.
Logan: "This is all well and good. I can suit up and go join the fight ... but who to back me up?"
Just then, a female mudokon stumbled through a normal doorway, and Logan gasped, cringing back.

(Ooc: Eh. Halije is in the security room now, or "his office" as it is now being called. :fuzgrin:. Why change it?)
Halije: *Wakes up to the sound of sirens in the room, and reads the multiple messages. One catches his eye. It says:*
Destroy all offencive invaders with factory ultra megawatt defence cannon? Yes/No
Halije:"Yes!"
*The computer bleeps a few times, then reads:*
No ultra megawatt defence cannon found in this factory's system. Or anywhere in Mudos. Please select something else.
Halije: *Swears, then reads another message that says:*
Authorise use of heavy weaponary in armoury? Yes/No
"Uhh... Yes!"
*The computer bleeps a few times than says:*
Use of heavy weaponary authorised. Weapons may be found behind the *Danger - Keep out* reinforced door that is now open. Please use weapons with caution.
*The last message is then braudcasted throughout the factory*
Halije: "Nice to know I contributed..."
*Falls back to sleep*

Kix was still in the old part of RF.
Kix: "Woow..... Really creepy. All those signs covered with blood."
*Goes deeper into the factory and jumps down a ledge*
She reads "Molluck sucks" on a sign.
*lays down*
***Bud***
*stops panicing*
Bud: "hmmm... Wait a minute... They aren't after me.... No one is, not even the industrialists. They can't hurt me, and those muds are here to rescue us!!! This is a great chance for me to escape!!! Now nothing will go wrong!!!"

(OOC: It would sure help if Dripid where to show his eh... face.)

Nick note's dave crashing and had a doubt.

Nick: First things first, Il be back for you later Dave!

Nick make's way trough the stockyards getting close to the electronincs box. He opens it.

Nick: Jeez! Someone took out the chips!

*Looks in the compartment of his pants for new chips*

Nick: Only one... where am I gonna get the other one? I can't afford either close the gate or activate the sensors... we need both of them to work.

Nick thoughts: Think! THink!!

*He spots the othter undamaged chips, from the wildlife cage control's, the electric fence control's and the camera's. He took a doubt.*

Nick thoughts: Those wildlife might be able to slow those freakin muds down... and I can reactivate the security... But Arnie, he will have me killed for letting them loose...

Nick out loud: Ah to the Odd! That wildlife isnt of much use when the plant is destoryd!

*He rips out the chip of the wildlife cage's and sticks it into the motion sensors slot. Then he places the new one into the gate's slot.*

Nick: Now I gotta run like hell If I want to make it to that gate intime...

*Starts running torwards the gate*

--- Meanwhile on the monitor screen in Haije's office ---

The monitor beeps a few time's

Closing Stockyard Gate's ---- Closing
Activate Stockyard Motion Sensors ---- Activated


--- Back in stockyards ---

Nick can see the gate closing slowly then saw Dave still lying unconcios. He quikely grabbed him, then tripped.

Nick: Shit!

He regrabbed dave and ran tordwards the gate which was now nearly closed.

Nick: I won't make it!

With one smooth move he slided Dave to the ground, right underneath the gate just before the gate itself bashed itself in the ground. Nick was still outside... hopeless and with hundreds of muds outside.
He turned around, his back against the fence, and grabbed his gun. Hoping it had enough ammo to last him till he could find a way back in....

Kix: *sudently sees a door not long away* "Hmm, where would this door lead" too *enteres it* "huh? This looks like stockyard *sees paramites and scarbs* "It IS stockyard. And who's that slig oer there? He looks like in trouble... Hmm maybe i should call him... HEY SLIG!!! COME OVER HERE!!!"

Nick turns around, when he hears someone yell. He sees a mud in a door hidden in the shadow.
Suddenly he hears a grumbling sound from the same direction.

Nick: Oh shit... Hey you! LOOK OUT! THAT GATE IS COMMING DOWN!!

Kix: *looks up* "WAAAAAAAHAAAA!!!" *Jumps outside.* *The door closes* "Great now i'm outside.... Hmm... Maybe i can get home from here... Oh.. What about the slig? He'll probarbly see me..." *Hides*

*Dave crawled from the bomber wreckage...*

Dave: Heeeellppp!!! I neeeed paaantss! Somebody Help!! HEEELP!

(occ: I attached an odd picture to this post...)

(OOC: What the heck?? 307 escapee's?!! LOL thats strange haha)